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Thanks! I've got zero artistic talent, so scrapping the map together was somehow the most challenging part—but it ended up being a lot of fun! 

I was stuck on properly getting the writing started for awhile, but then I found an excellent style guide for the system and the creative groove finally set in! This is my first published adventure, so I'm glad to hear I managed to get something cohesive together. Appreciate the review.

With the assigned title being a funky sci-fantasy film, most of the time spent on this went into considering how to mold its narrative beats and themes into something that'd fit into a sci-fi mech game—so I'm relieved to hear that landed well! Thanks for the rating. 

Thank you! It's an excellent game I highly recommend! When I first heard of an 'OSR Mech Game' I didn't think that'd work, but SU pulls it off well. The mech crafting has some nice customization to dive into, but the rest of the game is surprisingly straightforward to run. The 'Tough Choice' mechanic in particular is something I've pulled for inspiration to use in other games. 

Given all the comments this adventure's received, it's difficult to find feedback others haven't thoroughly covered already! But I'll rattle off some impressions—

Love the pre-gens. The brutal start and how tension never lets off is excellent. The cult is delightfully funky, and their disconnect to their prophet is a great twist. It's truly impressive how much content you managed to fit in. Some text is a lil difficult to read, but that's a very easy fix. 

All in all, outstanding work. 

Excellent map! Tickled by the set up with the dungeon being run by a lich rather than being inhabited by it.

Tons of potential here, but it needs some work. There's a lot of blank space in here which could be used to further flesh out the adventure after some reformatting. From what I've noted of other submissions, lots of "system-agnostic" modules have rough encounter descriptions for GMs to work with adapting and balancing to their system of choice, whereas system-specific modules have each encounter properly stated up. There's an awkward middle ground here with a specific system and some stats, but the rest left to DIY. 

If you decide to update this after the review period I'd suggest leaning into the system-agnostic vibes or fully 5e, which will help determine what to fill the blank space with. Would love to see it if you do! There's some fun ideas here I'd enjoy seeing more of.

Excellent visuals and intriguing myths! Love the design for the rollable tables.

Cut-out NPC tokens! Awesome to see, fun inclusion for people who'd play this physically.

The zine having a map you can physically put down to play on is also really cool! Though it looks like the information printed on its side might be something you normally wouldn't want players seeing? If that's something worth considering and you update this after the jam, maybe reformat to shift that text to the other pages; or make the map a smaller reference to be drawn elsewhere, giving you more room to expand upon the adventure. 

Excellent system-agnostic adventure here. Tons of evocative descriptions that give a DM plenty of material to work with in adapting this to their system of choice.

Love sapient saurians with dastardly agendas. Very fun contained adventure here! The map is wonderful.

Noticed a handful of spelling errors, but nothing that confuses reading of the adventure. 

Wonderful additions to Mythic Bastionland that stand out from the system's already diverse list of knights, seers, and myths. Enjoy the gloomy, watery vibes throughout. 

Love dragon sickness as a narrative trope, so it's awesome to find great RPG tools for it! Excellently designed mechanics and visuals in here.

Wonderful submission full of pulpy science-fantasy goodness! The funky set-up, twist on the heist, and map mechanics make this a memorable one-shot to whip out for game night. 

There's a ton of rich and evocative content to digest here. It seems a bit intimidating to run—but oh how I'd love to give it a try sometime. Well earned 5-Stars down the line from me.