Given all the comments this adventure's received, it's difficult to find feedback others haven't thoroughly covered already! But I'll rattle off some impressions—
Love the pre-gens. The brutal start and how tension never lets off is excellent. The cult is delightfully funky, and their disconnect to their prophet is a great twist. It's truly impressive how much content you managed to fit in. Some text is a lil difficult to read, but that's a very easy fix.
All in all, outstanding work.