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That sounds super exciting! Would love to learn more.  Should I reach out via discord or would you prefer another platform?

Never thought of playing rock, paper, scissors with myself.  Win some, lose some! Legendary xD

this was so much fun! The texts were on point, really smooth and easy to follow along. Texting with mom reminded me of my own in some aspects. 

What a sweet ending.  Loved the visuals too! I was honestly scrolling down the give up options just to see if there was something else to choose from. The experience portrayed was also very relatable.

It is incredible! The art, story and choosing between the 2 ways to react. How you managed to do this in 72 hours is beyond me xD Really impressive!

Awww I really felt for the main character. It was interesting to jump between time periods and see different versions of him. The moments where he remembers Margeret were wholesome too.

I actually ended up the same path as incobalt and wondered if this was an ending or if I did something wrong. Really intriguing! Curious to see how much we can expand our exploration day by day in a full version!

As mentioned from Danny_Makes_Games, the visuals really quickly delivered the mental / emotional states based on the environments shown. Thank you for sharing such a personal story! 

All the shrimp puns were amazing. The art adorable. And the writing hilarious. Awesome work!

Always enjoy a game involving brewing potions! Also curious how our choice at the beginning (selecting 2 of them) will influence the story in the full version!

I like that the dice roll makes you feel like it's random, but I also feel like we are meant to fail on purpose (because there is just no way that in such circumstances a sudden miracle will happen. You are on your own. And now you gotta do what you gotta do to get through). Really loved the characters too!

This was SO MUCH FUN! I loved interacting with everything, just so I could see how our little doggy will comment on it. Also Higgs struggling with their own mortality when we mention their age (and the comment about putting a chair into our "own pocket") was 10/10. 

Nice! My main recommendation would be to limit the options where the player can investigate in the beginning (I felt a little overwhelmed at first) and then with time, more choices could become available.  Maybe for later also have some sort of glossary to keep track of any new piece of information gained.

Awesome!! Writing was awesome, hilarious and fun. Really enjoyed trying to figure out which spells or actions will work on either characters xD

I enjoyed the feeling of being mindful of my resilience. Do I use it to help myself or others? What will be the consequence for the next segment? Could I have done something differently?

I really liked the theme interpretation! How resilience can also be taken into another extreme, pushing ourselves to an extend where it is no longer in our best interest.

I am somehow imagining this as a netflix series xD Or a secret third option where player tries flirting with the host

Left a comment on the page! If you have specific feedback your looking for regarding the story, let me know!

Medieval fantasy world sounds epic to me but unfortunately I do not speak Spanish, I apologise

One note on the flying paper (not sure if intentional) - if I click on it, the dialogue continues. At first I did not realise I had to wait for it to settle on the screen and to expand (later saw it in the game description). What could help is that if player clicks on the floating paper, the paper then immediately snaps to the centre of the screen (so we don´t lose out on information or what the dialogue is referring to as the story continues).

Would love to know more! I have sent you a friend request on discord, would be happy to learn more about the concept :)

Hey there! Where could I find more information about the project? I'd be curious to learn more.

Hi Seb!

I definitely enjoy the writing vibe! What would be the best way to send you some work samples? I have a google drive folder with some screen recordings / videos I made for a casual mobile game.

Hello there!

My name is Sofia and I'm a Narrative Designer / Game Writer with some free time on the side. 

The genres I have experience with are: 

• Comedy
• Romance 
• Fantasy

In terms of tone, it can go from light hearted to mature - let me know what your project needs.

If you have existing work already and just want some feedback on it, I'm also open for that.