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Absolutely loved this. Between all the otter stuff, the tone and character interactions, and the ending I felt like this was just made for me specifically. This is exactly the kind of fanfiction I gobble up.

Loved the pre-credits ending, the post-credits ending feels very out of place afterwards... I could see it for the character, but it feels very very odd and disjointed, like horror movie stingers that were tackled on for sequel-bait.

Yooooooo furry VtM? I'm already beyond down.

I know this is an old post but I saw it scrolling and had to reply... Wow, I never would've seen this and thought it was practice. It's got a lot of love and time in it. I'm really enjoying it.

Found a couple weird things in the book. In your notes it says "Sin overflow now permanently ticks 2 sin boxes instead of 1. Sin marks by themselves don't lower sin anymore" but the Sin Marks page (86) still  says Sin Marks lower overflow by 1. Someone might get confused and think both apply.

This is an absolute masterpiece of an update. I wasn't expecting to get so much of the protag's backstory and it was a real gut punch. And it added even more layers of mystery... I wasn't expecting the story to take this turn, and I'm so pleased with how everything resolved so far. So eager for the next chapter!