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You've piqued my interest about Shadowdark with this one. The layout is so clean and I appreciate the legend on the first page for italic and bold text. The descriptions provide GM's with a good idea of what the rooms should look like while being loose enough that they can tune it as they see fit. The Pledge/Burden system is also very interesting! Eager to see what the module will look like when you add the art you mentioned in a previous comment.

Thank you as well for the kind words! And I'll be sure to add "swank" and "deft" to my vocabulary too (creative, conversational, or maybe both).

This was actually one of the submissions I looked at for inspiration with my own work! I like how vivid you got with the room descriptions despite the limited space.

Gotta credit the sources I draw from! Thanks for the positive feedback!

Thank you for the kind words! I'll keep making things when I have the time!

To address each paragraph:

1. Yes, I was inspired by Superman (2025).

2. The idea was that the room order was decided by the dice rolls; if you were lucky maybe you'd get the Trapper first to guide you through each trap, or maybe you'd be challenged by having to sneak through sleeping bandits. And the lack of a map was partially because I didn't have time but also I wanted to give some element of freedom to the GM about item/enemy placement.

3.  I can't believe I missed that typo lol. Probably shouldn't have published so early in the morning.

Thank you so much for the criticism and the kind words!