I enjoyed this demo! I liked the atmosphere and the art and UI are really well done. I'm still not too sure about the characters, but the demo was pretty short so I'm sure there'll be more to them later, although I do adore Cole! 

Thank you for playing too! And yea I really wanted to write them well so I'm glad that came through!

If you can't rmb then that's fine! I just figured I should fix them if someone did find any :')) Also yea writing them was like "are they sorta flirting....." and then I felt like a parent lmao

Thank you for the kind comment! I don't usually write romantic endings actually, despite the genre. While writing I wanted to go with what felt natural and what I felt each character needed, if that makes sense.

I'm glad you liked Ellis! He's very precious to me and I definitely have more on his family..... I'm actually planning to write some more details on what happened in the past year plus family background in the upcoming development pdf. Mostly I wanted a space to drop stuff I wasn't able to include in the game because they didn't fit. I'd try to include a bit of Yang's background as well, so if you're able to support it that would be great!

Aww this was really nice and creative! //spoilers// I loved the part where they said they weren't a ghost and then talked about how they started disappearing? I love the ambiguity of it and that something else might be going on!

hngnngng tHANK YOU YOU'RE SO SWEET

Aaa thank you for the thoughtful comment! I started it off with pretty wild ideas but as I worked on the characters I guess it came together that way? (Also I loved Butterfly soup too, it's a great game!)

I actually felt compelled to write romantic endings to fit the genre but...decided to do what felt natural for them instead. Also, I really wanted to write a strong friendship between Ellis and Dante, rather than anything romantic (Dante's also kinda asexual).

Ohh could you let me know where/what the typos were? I ran it through a spellcheck and got some friends to look over it, but some things might've slipped by. Also I'd consider adding music to the menu in future games! I actually enjoy sound design so it might be fun to play with that too...

And thank you again! I can't wait to start on some new projects already haha

Thank you so much for leaving a comment! I'm so glad you loved the characters;; I really focused on writing them in this story so I'm glad it came through! Also I enjoy sound design and the mood for some scenes are really important to me...tho I also have to be thankful to the artists who are kind enough to share their work for use!

Anyway this comment made me really happy so, thank you for taking the time to tell me! <3

I already left a lengthy feedback on your survey but...I really loved this game! Rei was a really interesting and well-written character imo, and even though he was full of flaws I'm excited to follow his story. I'll look forward to updates!!

I just finished this and thought it was pretty good! I enjoyed the character interactions the most; I thought all three main characters had really unique personalities and their banter was fun (though sometimes stressful). Of course I'm a sap so I loved the good ending...and I thought the development and changes in their friendship was cute as well. Thanks for creating this game!

I really enjoyed this game! The art and writing were really charming and I loved the interface design. All the characters felt fleshed out even though it was a short game, and the cooking was so fun!

I really enjoyed this game! I don't know what I expected but it was....out of this world. Anyway I really love the art - all the characters are so unique, and the animations were such a nice touch! 

(spoiler?) Lastly my favourite part was when I get to tell my daughter I LOVE HER. THANKS

Hi, I hope you're doing well! I played your visual novels a little while ago but didn't get to leave a comment until now, but I've really enjoyed all of them! The characters and backgrounds are so pretty and playing your games just puts me in a nice mood?? Also the main character is so cute and I really felt for her and want to cheer her on! Elijah and Noah are also interesting as well - I love their banter with each other! I'm excited to see what else you have in store for them, good job and good luck with it!

Just tried this game and thought it was pretty solid for a demo! I wished there was more information teasing the lore or urban legend before St Clementine appeared though. It seems like it might be more exciting to anticipate it that way.

Otherwise, I thought the art and environment was great! It really set up the atmosphere for the game, good job!

I loved this game! I was excited for the premise, and I'm so glad it was done wonderfully! The art was really good, and I love how flashy the GUI was — it really fit the game. So far I've only played Enchantress' route but I thought the conflict was well-written (and also she's, really hot). I really enjoyed it, thanks for making and sharing this game!