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Cool concept. Just a few usability things. It would be good to start on the pause to get a sense of how you play. And when you try to start again after playing, you have to fully refresh the page to start again. 

A cool concept. I would just break things up a bit to make it clear what's going on. Maybe even a button that lets you just say one thing? 

Weird and cool. I like the versions of narrative that these poems suggest. 

This was surprisingly hard at times and easy at others! I could not work out how to get over that tall barrier. Agreed with RazorFingers that a level select or something would be good so that you can maybe go for high scores even. Maybe challenges, like only jump twice?

Really cool experience. 

You have to click enter when you're in the purple bubbling area. Then you get the option to restart (R) or go to the next level (N).

I like the message of this game. I found the looping 'someone stepped on it' interesting. And that flower art is gorgeous.

One thing I wasn't clear about-- is there a limit to how much water and sunlight you should be aiming for? Might be cool if it reduced over days, and you had to try and keep it stable. As it is, I could just leave the umbrella to the side and there were no negative effects for a while. 

Thanks for the fun experience.