Endertaining plot and funny details in the story. Had a few elements helping to unmask the "ability's" o AI and just using data-mass of other "user_input"-providers with a very fluid flow. Should be used in school's for teaching internet-competence, but I am sure in a few week's it would be outdated. Anyway, good work
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It's very nice that you did the work to make a flexible gender-choice possible. The design of the character is very good (or just hit my taste), and the writing enjoyable, the plot has enough deep but keep a stady speed. The conversation-skills are a bit to advanced for a isolated character, but I don't real mind. I like that the player-character is not such a helpless cry-baby like in other novels and able to find his nerv's after the first shock. If I would be picky a few more choices could be cool, but to be honest I don't real know what to do better, the game is already a nice experience and like a short-vacation after a long workday.
Sigh... had hoped at least ich.io is a save spot, but now I wasted a half hour to seach your game for a review without success. Sorry you have to deal with that shit and glad your spirit is unbroken. It's somekind extreme sick and radical that suddenly media get censored because gay content, feels like during back in sowjet-times.
Very good writing, I also liked the parody's of the roleplay-influenced popcultur from the MC. The final of the plot was a real hard stone to gulp down. The question why the MC is so addicted to religion is not fully answered to me, but that can have their reasons in cultural differences. (By the way: I feeled never so much pitty for a game-NPC, and I played all Echo-ends. Poor wolf.)
The tactical main-problem would been the logistic for a army-body with this ressources. Would just be possible to move them in many small groups which can themself supply from the transit area, and the biggest problem would be re-union just in time and the right area for a few hours to fight with united force. Sorry, have readed
to much books about military-history ^^ But interesting lore, sounds very autentic and convincing.
Have readed a few books from lovecroft, and the fascination of a vague discripted horror seems to be indeed a important thing for him. Your story is superior to his concept because you have a watchdog where build a interesting contrast to the helpless downfall to insanity.
(And I personally had ever the feeling the strange thing on the Titanic-case was not the sinking ship - that's a normal thing - but the Incapacity to act from the Bridge-crew. They took no usual measures to rescue the ship like order to setting leak-sails, building koffder-dam's, or use the pumps in a more sensefull way. For me the creepy element was the paralysis of the crew despite they had a lot time to react)
And of course, great story by the way. Reading is sometimes mental exthausting (also for a guy with firefighter-experience), but I still enjoy it, thanks for your work and afford