It's very nice that you did the work to make a flexible gender-choice possible. The design of the character is very good (or just hit my taste), and the writing enjoyable, the plot has enough deep but keep a stady speed. The conversation-skills are a bit to advanced for a isolated character, but I don't real mind. I like that the player-character is not such a helpless cry-baby like in other novels and able to find his nerv's after the first shock. If I would be picky a few more choices could be cool, but to be honest I don't real know what to do better, the game is already a nice experience and like a short-vacation after a long workday.