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fem!johnlock is my comfort ship this is bringing me so much joy!!!!!! I actually kinda skipped things and read this little one-shot first, but now I can't wait to play the main story!!! your writing is so light and fun, everything flows so nicely!!

Hi!! I've been using this as an oracle for some solo journaling and it's been a huge help!!!! I'm still learning the ways of solo TTRPG but this is such a great resource for prompts. I've been using the verb oracle a lot, and I'm a bit surprised at how much it's helped haha

Hi! I've recently gotten really into TTRPGs and this one has such a nice premise I was immediately drawn to it! I think it will really help me develop a character I've been spinning around in my head since 2020 haha

I'm also a recently graduated translator, and I'm trying to build up my portfolio. Would you let me translate your game to Brazilian Portuguese? I'd only ask that you credit me and let me add it to my portfolio. If not, that's okay!

I really can't wait to try your game, I think I might start a playthrough this weekend haha

hi!! this is such a fantastic game, and it was my first attempt at a solo rpg, i love it so much!!! i didn't actually manage to finish my first playthrough, but now that i'm more familiar with the genre i really want to try again. i actually really like some of the stuff i wrote for that first attempt haha

the setting is so unusual and so delightful!! not to mention very creepy....

also, i was wondering if you would let me translate the game to brazilian portuguese? i'm currently trying to build my portfolio, so i'd only ask that you credit me, if you let me translate it. i also really want to make my friends play it shksbdkdhd

either way, i love this concept!! one of my favorite one page rpgs for sure!

No, in the end I give up :/

Hi!! This entire book is so incredibly well made!!! I haven't tried playing yet, but just reading through the guide and learning about Sunnyside Bay and the ways the game helps you write such a heartfelt story was enough for me to get the cozy feeling it promised.

I'm particularly interested in the Personality Metres. They're such a great system for writing characters!! I might start writing my characters based on openness/presence/attachment stats from now on haha

The whole game is very well written and organized, and I really want to try writing something for it, even if I don't end up finishing the story (i have a hard time finishing what i start x^x). Thank you for sharing such an amazing project!!

hi!! just sent the file to you by email. thank you so much for letting me translate this fantastic game!! (the police still don't know i killed my neighbor for being too loud at night)

hi! first of all i love the concept of this game dkfjsdjfksd i haven't managed to finish my little campaign yet, but i'm absolutely having a blast (so far i'm getting away with murder hehe)

i'm also a brazilian translator who recently graduated, and i'm trying to work on my portfolio, so i was wondering if you'd allow me to translate your game into Brazillian Portuguese? i'd send the translated file to you so you can post it here on the game page, only ask that i get credited for it :)

either way you game has been a delight to play<3 i'll definitely try some of your other games soon

Hi! Just sent you an e-mail about the translator role :)

Hi! Is there a way to add more states to the list? I've changed their names to 0-25-50-75-90 and I wish I could add a sixth state for "done" instead of removing one of the listed numbers. Otherwise I'm really enjoying the tool so far

it's a very nice concept, and i enjoyed the depth mechanic a lot, but i agree with other comments that the way it works is not very intuitive, so it took me a while to understand how to play. that's not necessarily a bad thing, but in case making us learn through trial and error was not your intention, maybe look into adding a brief explanation of how the depth mechanic works in relation to the orbs and their plants :)

i would also say that, despite advancing a lot further after i got a better grasp of the gameplay, i still got completely stuck at times after using one orb to travel forwards, then moving backwards after leaving it behind. it happened with the red orb - i moved with it then left it, forgetting it was what made it possible for me to move forwards, and when i moved back, i lost the orb and wasn't able to move again to get it back. it's also an issue in that area where you move forwards with the white orb and then fall into a red orb area. that resulted in me having to restart the game and lose all my progress (twice). i would definitely suggest adding an "undo" button to allow us players an easy fix for silly mistakes like that!

all that being said, i really loved the game, and the art is very pretty which is always a big plus!!

i really hope you continue working on this project, and i'm very happy that you chose to share it!!

Hello!
Ive been trying to load your game on Linux through Wine, and the text doesnt show, probably because I dont have the font on my computer.
Could you tell me which font you used on the dialog so I can download it, please?