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this is really cool and expansive!! i was so excited when i realized you could go either way at the beginning and end up in a different place :D the health bar is a bit finicky but that's prob a playground/unity problem and not you :p the character and level design looks so good ! i would consider possibly experimenting with making the character a tad larger- sometimes they are hard to keep track of since they're small and quick but that may be a stylistic choice. all the different enemies are so fun and i really enjoyed playing this and exploring the world you created :)

This is fun and has great character / creature design and other art! I love the storytelling aspects as well :) possibly experiment with making the player a tad larger, just so we can see her lovely art a bit better :) level design is super creative, great job!!

 this is super fun and I love the idea of trying to implement mini games :) The start/choice screen reminds me alot of Katamari!! :) I think the camera is a bit too zoomed, possibly experiment with different camera settings if possible and time allows :) it was just a bit hard to find some openings and areas to go with the zoom. the art is looking beautiful, great character design and thought put into everything! great work, loving this :D

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really interesting and fun use of playground stuff, hats off to you for thinking outside the box for this :) the art is looking really great too! the only thing that i think could be handy is perhaps some instructions, whether that be in the descriptions or through a dialogue bubble or something, i was just a bit confused at what to do at some points but when i did figure it out it was very fun!! great work :D

Super cool system of losing and regaining certain needs, feels immersive and personal to the player. I think it will look super interesting with your art, I am curious to see how you will style this as well! The only criticism I can think of at this time is maybe just making the capitals more consistent and adding onto the text a little more, maybe we could see more into each animals thoughts? Super interesting game and idea!!! Can't wait to see it finished :D -sam

Amazing world building!! I can feel your passion for the subject through the way you write. Adding definitions or context between certain topics in this universe is a great touch! The added memories and information make it feel more interactive and immersive. The name and character screen feels a little retro which I really enjoy. I am excited to see how you expand upon and depict your universe. The mechanics you added all work really smoothly as well.  Great work so far!!! :D -sam

The use of the timer is so interesting and unique!! It makes it feel so immersive and gives the feeling of genuine struggle and confusion. You write really well,  describing everything so intensively adds a lot to this feeling.  The only crit I can think of at the moment is to possibly just add another option or two to add a little more personality to the player, since sometime the two options given are a bit similar to each other. Maybe there are different aspects of this person that could be explored. Super cool and I am super excited to see how the art comes out!! - Sam :)

The interactive object choice is so cool and unique!! I love the way you implemented that into your writing. It was super immersive for me! Even steps for preparing for the dissection are great touches that enhance gameplay for me.  Everything you have so far is really interesting and I also enjoy how you styled the text conversation. With your added art this is gonna be so sick!! Maybe later on it could be interesting to add a timer system for the dissection or a more visual inventory bar later in development. Awesome work!!! :D - sam

The story is super cute and I love the personal touches :] It's gonna look so cool with your added art!!! I don't have many critiques at this current stage, but maybe experiment with the text speed, possibly a tiny bit faster? (this might just be a me thing) and maybe if you add more objects make the stories a bit more varied. I really enjoyed the monchichi story in particular! Loving this :D - Sam