The use of the timer is so interesting and unique!! It makes it feel so immersive and gives the feeling of genuine struggle and confusion. You write really well, describing everything so intensively adds a lot to this feeling. The only crit I can think of at the moment is to possibly just add another option or two to add a little more personality to the player, since sometime the two options given are a bit similar to each other. Maybe there are different aspects of this person that could be explored. Super cool and I am super excited to see how the art comes out!! - Sam :)