I'm really into short satisfying games that mix playfulness with sad, dark themes so I find this one very cool.
I like the graphics and how the story is told, how things change and how the events are composed. It's charming so I have the sense I'd play more of it.
This is the first game from you that I play and I think I'll also enjoy your other work.
You could say it's a little barebones but that's beside the point.
Very well done.
(I encountered a bug. When I stopped talking to the "doorman" in the intro I fell through the floor and had to restart... a little test of patience that was definitely worth it.)
The bar is set extremely high! Good! Yeah, I intended this to be a kind of experiment and that really shows... At first I thought nobody would care but that's clearly not the case. I feel honored, revitalized and very lucky. Anyway, the jumps are ginormous and the turns so sudden because I wrote the story in practically one stretch and while I recognize what goals a story must have and the overall structure to achieve them I didn't fully understand, so I went all over the place... I joined the jam late so clearly that didn't help either. Not enough practice, like you said. I take full responsability. Also I really appreciate the length and depth of your review! It has cleared things up in my mind and I will continue to work on my abilities. I appreciate your effort, you went all in and I highly respect that. You've told me precisely what I needed to hear. Thank you very much!
Just finished it, really cool experience. It's both a bit sickening and funny. Nice work! It's a bit janky, I did find some bugs and got out of bounds but it's nothing that major, I recommend people just stick to the script and you'll be fine
