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Yup, it's rather diffucult to convey any core idea between these whirling notes. There should be somewhat a tree trunk or a spine to keep it all in form. It may be a rhytmic part such as drum pattern or melody with strong rhytmic accents. Keep up!

Very interesting set of instruments here. Fairy-like sounds with occasional off-key notes. I don't know whether that was on purpose or not. To me, it lacks a sort of core and progression. It sways back and forth like a wave, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere.

That's definitely a strong start! These vibes gave me goosebumps and a warm feeling. The overall feeling I'd describe is like the credits rolling at the end of a film — like you've successfully finished a long journey. I'd love to hear this track polished and fine-tuned later. For now, it's a bit sketchy and simple.

Thank you guys! You're welcome!

This work definitely captures the feeling of being lost in the middle of nowhere. These sounds bring me images of an endless sea lit by a full moon, but your compass is broken and your star map is water-damaged after a storm. You find yourself turning in every direction, desperately searching for a single spark of light on the horizon...

Very good job, I want to point out your grat ear for melody, love the composition work! 

Woah, this is a solid track! I'm really loving the melody and progression; it gives me those Bioshock game vibes. Amazing sound quality too. For the first time, I feel like rating something five stars across the board!

Well I guess this work will find its place in my music library)

My first thought was, "Wow, this feels like it's from a pixel-art game" — like something set in dungeons and dark forests. I only caught the sonar sound at the very end, which was meant to link it to the ocean. It's a simple but charming track; I could honestly see it working in a pixel-art setting

Not an expert in vintage consoles or chiptune, but this is such a bright, cheerful track — it instantly made me smile and think of Spongebob Squarepants. Personally, I just would have liked a denser, more dynamic arrangement. 

Thank you! Kinda unexpected to feel it as a 007 movie but why not) Overall I'm pretty satisfied with my job, it may have had more time spent  on mastering but we're not working for music label athe moment :)

The gloomy atmosphere is a good start, but the track feels underdeveloped. The overall vibe comes across as vague and shaky. Don't stop though — this track has a lot of potential if give it some more focus!

One question : why only 2:33? we need MOAR  :D     Sounds seriosly mastered and well structured. Track have very warm vibe of august, somewhat about closing a season though there's only one sample of shoreline whisper.

A nice, captivating, and hypnotic track. I loved the wide soundstage, it really switched my mind into observation mode.

Thank you man! Glad to hear that you felt like that you're in another place while listening to this track!

Thank you very much! I see that I reached my goal - make an emotional experience through the musical journey)