Very interesting set of instruments here. Fairy-like sounds with occasional off-key notes. I don't know whether that was on purpose or not. To me, it lacks a sort of core and progression. It sways back and forth like a wave, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere.
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Hello, thank you for your opinion, which will help me improve. As for the off-key notes, that was intentional—I don’t know, I thought it would sound like the ocean. Basically, what I was trying to convey was a sense of immersion, as if you were in the deep ocean, floating while observing what happens and moving around in a relaxed way. I probably didn’t transmit that very well, but at least I had fun making my first ambient track.
Have a good day/evening/night.