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So it's possible

Noted, thank you 

So, is there a bug, when it keeps looping on the page "you were no stranger to boredom", when you refuse to take halo or intentional?

If so, why lmao, so confusing, I'll stay on that page then, nope, not taking it

I mean... Gnawing at walls. (Haha, there is, and two of them!)

Oh boi, did it was fun to read, yes it did, but even aside that, I love Ash they are cutie pie. Not just that, overall great

You really did, I just can't from this sentence properly. Something something... you did a good job with a depiction of this issues and how they can influence a person? Thinking about it -wise and such? Not just that, but people -- ahem, demons -- of note are extremely sensible about it, that's great. For example by taking things that mc says seriously, that is, and treating them as normal person

The very concept of ✨ demon besties ✨ kinda cool I must admit. I love my demon besties and theirs relations with mc

But Ash the most, like what was these kissing scenes AND WHY THEY ARE SO GOOD AYO I MELTED IN MY CHAIR AND GNAWED ON THE WALL, erm yea, anyways

Past that, your depiction of mental issues and how they can be treated are refreshingly sensitive

Mc is cool, world is cool, characters are cool, sorry, my comprehensive english is restricted to a blatant thirsting, can't do a whole odes how something is great, but your story is great, the entirety of it, and every aspect there is and can be

Thanks, I thought I might have missed something, but now... Hah! xD

Well, that was pleasantly surprising, considering how "forced marriage" thingy usually goes, with all the toxicity and abuse, no shade on the enjoyers, I just personally don't like that.

Hawk is a fun and interesting character, the very concept of someone "not from this world" always fun to explore.
Just interested how Hawk really views this arrangement for now? Put human in the tower, let them do whatever, wait them to die, keep on mysteriously existing?

But there's some problem with the pacing, like we have a bunch of descriptions of the places from the tower that don't have real narrative use later, you can't explore each of them at the first day, but at the same time we have this time skip where mc doesn't do much, just chillin' with strange cabinets (which have too much of descriptive attention for some magical gimmick, unless this is The Weapon, I dunno).
And I was just "yeah, and" during this skip, don't tell me why I doing this stuff, let me do it (I won't, the king and momma can go f- themselves with this kind of tasks).

Secondly, there's no explanation why Hawk will go for this arrangement at the first place and you can't really ask? Not them, not another elf person. Unless I missed something?

And some minor third thing, that isn't really anything important lmao, if you will do this "cute magic pet stuff", please make it optional, this usually just annoying for some people (me, only god knows how many stories I dropped because of the Pet Stuff). I'm not referring lizards here, they are cool detail, that adds to the world. But as it is.

Aaaand I was really disappointed /j that you can't tell to cut it off and let mc to sleep to that whatever beast which has a serious problems with the concept of closed doors at night. So rude.

Yeah, anyway, this is overall good read, I had nice time with it and I think this can be something great and worthwhile at the end.

Wow, the thing that been extremely lacking in my life for a couple of years - some hope in humanity! (Fictional fine too.)

I loved this feeling from your story, where you can trust someone, and this trust actually pays off. Cathartic stuff, thank you, I legitimately cried couple of times.