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True! People mostly focus on the negative side and forget about things they enjoyed. I honestly didn't like MC at first but was ok with her later closer to the end of the story we have available. I believe in author and their vision for the game. Customers can say if they didn't like something but I feel like lately all the comments were a bit too rude and it can be very discouraging for a solo dev!

I wouldn't say that MC is purely rude. Don’t get me wrong, I also didn’t like MC’s behavior but she knew Jayce for two days. He was hella rude (from her pov) when they first met and extremely suspicious on the next day. I can see why her walls were up and she was defensive toward him. We accept Jayce’s behavior bc this is what we were expecting from him from the very beginning and were surprised by MC’s personality.

Still I agree, MC’s personality should be toned down bc most players didn’t enjoy it. She can be bold, even rude sometimes, but it needs to be for the right reasons and not out of nowhere. At the end we all want the game to be the best it can be, but this is the author's creation and their decision is last. If they would listen to us - great, if they will continue the way they see it fits the story more - all the power to them.

Thank you for giving us this notice P1NK-ANG3L! You did warn everyone buying the game (on the main page) that it will contain femdom and maledom so it's expected MC would get to be bold. We just haven't experienced the dominant Jayce in her presence so they will most likely balance each other a bit later. As a sub person myself I'm really looking forward to dominant Jayce in the future.

As a consumer it's easy to criticise and forget about all the work needed to be put into the product. It's very kind of you to consider what fans of your work say but also believe in your vision of the work.  It's very important for the author to enjoy their own story while they create it to not burn out <3

DAMN I LOVE WHEN IT GETS DARK AND EERIE! The fluff is nice and lighter moments are needed for contrast but OH BOI the moment it gets dark it's absolutely incredible and rewarding. Demo charmed me so much I bought it immediately after finishing it. I'm not into violence but the scenes of violence in the prologue were so well written I was glued to my screen with disbelief. Introduction to the story was great and made me immediately attached to Jayce, every part of the story from his POV is so well written and entertaining. I also like the graphics, the use of 3d gives it a strange charm, I can't really put my finger on it.  I need more 3d erotica for women.

Jayce is lovely, a good mix of awkwardly cute and freaky obsessed. Can’t wait to see more of him, his hornyness and succumbing to madness just like at the end of Act 1 part 2. So good~ I will be waiting for the next parts, I’m sure the story will be a rollercoaster of emotions! Love the game and will be actively following its updates on social media :)

I also want to leave a few points for the author as a consumer of their work, I will try to be as objective as possible and don't mean to discourage their creative freedom:

- MC is lovely but she’s not a blank slate for readers to insert into which is COMPLETELY OK. She seems kinda dominant with a strong but conflicted will. In my opinion as a player/reader I think MC should be her own distinct character which we just so happen to be able to name. She should have her own look with the option for the players to choose a blank gray character. I approached the game with the thought I can somewhat roleplay myself but the moment she officially appeared I knew I was wrong. MC’s hornyness and attraction toward Jayce were the only things I could relate to lol. Which isn’t bad, there is no need to self insert, the story itself and Jayce are interesting enough to capture players

- act 1 part 2 MC’s POV focuses a lot on describing her extreme emotion jumps in short sentences, mostly her thoughts, sprinkling in some descriptions would give it a better pacing

- the text box could be a bit darker and letters could use a black frame around them for better visibility, same with the name above the text box

- it would be cool to have some horny bg music for spicier scenes in MC’s POV at least, in act 1 part 2 she has only one music track (unless my brain hasn’t register other tracks) and it gets a bit repetitive compared to Jayce’s POV music

I have great hopes for this game, Jayce makes me want to make a fanart of him!