DAMN I LOVE WHEN IT GETS DARK AND EERIE! The fluff is nice and lighter moments are needed for contrast but OH BOI the moment it gets dark it's absolutely incredible and rewarding. Demo charmed me so much I bought it immediately after finishing it. I'm not into violence but the scenes of violence in the prologue were so well written I was glued to my screen with disbelief. Introduction to the story was great and made me immediately attached to Jayce, every part of the story from his POV is so well written and entertaining. I also like the graphics, the use of 3d gives it a strange charm, I can't really put my finger on it. I need more 3d erotica for women.
Jayce is lovely, a good mix of awkwardly cute and freaky obsessed. Can’t wait to see more of him, his hornyness and succumbing to madness just like at the end of Act 1 part 2. So good~ I will be waiting for the next parts, I’m sure the story will be a rollercoaster of emotions! Love the game and will be actively following its updates on social media :)
I also want to leave a few points for the author as a consumer of their work, I will try to be as objective as possible and don't mean to discourage their creative freedom:
- MC is lovely but she’s not a blank slate for readers to insert into which is COMPLETELY OK. She seems kinda dominant with a strong but conflicted will. In my opinion as a player/reader I think MC should be her own distinct character which we just so happen to be able to name. She should have her own look with the option for the players to choose a blank gray character. I approached the game with the thought I can somewhat roleplay myself but the moment she officially appeared I knew I was wrong. MC’s hornyness and attraction toward Jayce were the only things I could relate to lol. Which isn’t bad, there is no need to self insert, the story itself and Jayce are interesting enough to capture players
- act 1 part 2 MC’s POV focuses a lot on describing her extreme emotion jumps in short sentences, mostly her thoughts, sprinkling in some descriptions would give it a better pacing
- the text box could be a bit darker and letters could use a black frame around them for better visibility, same with the name above the text box
- it would be cool to have some horny bg music for spicier scenes in MC’s POV at least, in act 1 part 2 she has only one music track (unless my brain hasn’t register other tracks) and it gets a bit repetitive compared to Jayce’s POV music
I have great hopes for this game, Jayce makes me want to make a fanart of him!