Really good message, I like how you touched on a more serious topic as a visual novel. However I think the art and the writing takes away from the serious message a little bit, more time could have been spent into working on that I think. I agree with Marvin in saying that some things that were said were a bit repetitive. The color palette becoming the trans flag is a cool little detail.
Could be more successful if there were maybe some more funny events, other than that there isn't much interest once you kill the moths. Maybe make the moths more difficult to catch or add some variability as you click.
The creature is stunning, but upon learning that you did everything in Blender I'm honestly scared for you, please please please learn how to use Zbrush it will make your life so much easier. Coming from a fellow creature artist
