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I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.

Thanks for your input.

Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.

Hope that helps!

So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.

I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)

Mmmmh, not much except that it's not your cup of tea...? Hahaha— Thanks for the typos report! Will fix it after the rewrite.

Dang, sorry about that. I'll get it fixed when I'm done with the rewrite :)

Will fix it when I'm done with the rewrite, thx!!

Deleted it because of spoiler—sorry, didn't see it until now :((

Hey there! Did you try downloading the itch.io app? You can download the game here if I remember right. Otherwise, no, there's no downloadable version, sorry!

Eventually, that might happen haha :))

Awww that's so sweet. Thank you, love u too! I hope I can keep up the good work so everyone can appreciate this story as much as I do!❤️

Hopefully, it's fixed. If not, it'll be in the next update! :)) Thanks!

Hey there! There are some helpful templates on itch.io that could assist you. I created mine using this template: https://vahnya.itch.io/twine-template

Additionally, here are some other templates that might be useful (though I'm not sure if they're all updated):

https://ccrberus.itch.io/twine-sugarcube-template / https://manonamora.itch.io/twine-sugarcube-templates  /  https://vahnya.itch.io/twine-template-ii

Hope that helps! <3

Hi! I'm glad to see you like my work! Don’t worry, M!MC won’t always be a top. The choice will be given when the time comes with the ROs.

Hope that helps!

Thank you for the screenshots! Currently fixing the whole chap1 :))

Lemme go buy some glue, gotta fix that

Glad to see someone appreciate Athiel; kinda hard when they're so determined to ruin the MC's mood most of the time

Thank you for loving my work!

No, no, don't worry; you didn't sound rough at all to me.

To report bugs/errors, you can either send them to me on Tumblr via asks or simply email me: echonoirstories@gmail.com

Should be fixed! Hope it didn't completely break your immersion.

Who can resist El? They're such a sweetheart

I mean... now you got 4 sweet ROs, isn't it nice? (I cried too when I wrote the prologue...)

I'm sorry😭😭

If you’re feeling something, it means I’m doing my job right. So I hope that when things get better in the story, it will resonate just as much!

Yeah, I saw some errors and will fix them when I notice them or when people report them to me (I already started with a few today while writing something on the side).

Also, thank you! Writing 100k words is tiring, but I loved every minute of it, so I guess that's fine. Probably.

Nope no date with a ghost I'm afraid (unless? Just kidding! Or am I...?)

Sorry can't do..... but thanks!