Please, dw, I'm not taking this the wrong way, hahaha. Maybe a two-eyed wink? Double wink? I feel like changing to 'blinking' loses that vibe 'wink' has...
The explanations won't be as detailed in Jordan or Robin's route as they are on Athiel's route since they'll have a different perspective depending on who told MC about El. Either way, you'll be able to hate them and cut contact if that's your wish. Or just hate them and make them grovel before 'forgiving' them and working on things (<—it'll take time for MC to forgive). Or forgive them (then again, forgiving won't make MC forget).
Hope you still enjoyed the update despite the frustration, haha
I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.
Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.
So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.
I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)
Hey there! Did you try downloading the itch.io app? You can download the game here if I remember right. Otherwise, no, there's no downloadable version, sorry!
Hey there! There are some helpful templates on itch.io that could assist you. I created mine using this template: https://vahnya.itch.io/twine-template
Additionally, here are some other templates that might be useful (though I'm not sure if they're all updated):
Yeah, I saw some errors and will fix them when I notice them or when people report them to me (I already started with a few today while writing something on the side).
Also, thank you! Writing 100k words is tiring, but I loved every minute of it, so I guess that's fine. Probably.
Nope no date with a ghost I'm afraid (unless? Just kidding! Or am I...?)
Fair enough.