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已收到反馈,下个版本会一并优化你提到的部分问题。

这个FVN的表现和创意都挺强的,包括ui设计,不过故事有个别地方阅读不流畅,还有待改进。不过很多片段确实具有视觉冲击力,即使不依靠cg,也能感到部分文字的犀利,给我一种真的“血腥”的感觉,当然,非高潮的剧情的处理也能很好缓冲对对部分剧情的消化。就是,BGM的过渡还是得调整下吧。

短评:短小精悍,有小巧思。虽然结束很快,但是读完整个故事,也方便我去思考作者想向我们表达什么。不过剧情还是有点毛病在身的,而漫漫长夜这个主题在这个故事也像是充当世界观或背景的存在。

好吃好吃,怎么还有小甜文,蝙蝠和鬣狗,你们一定要永远在一起呀。剧情读起来意外顺利,情感表达上带动了我的快乐。

需要一定阅读水平,且感觉很多地方的过渡不太流畅,很多地方地方需要暂停下来细品,剧情确实有很多需要被优化。

短评:这个故事一开始很压抑,随着剧情发展,整个故事线也清晰了起来,看完我感到的是释怀吗?我只能感到守的这个夜晚真的很漫长。看完后,我代入主角的角度思考,有点意犹未尽。

The Long Nights,这部FVN,需要一定的阅读水平,虽然剧情一开始不知道是讲的什么,但是越往后面,就越好理解,越精彩。一场戏剧,一场戏中戏,剧情的主要角色在整个故事都被置入于“一个长夜”,应该说,各位在梦魇中竭力活着的长夜。剧情和音乐的过渡都需要调整和优化,包括场景。

AfterDying,这部FVN给我一种熟悉又陌生的感觉,虽然我是第一次看这个FVN啦。直入主题,此FVN在剧情和BGM在过渡上可以调整或加强;关于美术,虽然有一定量的立绘,但是此优点观众不会因剧情改动立绘时,转移对剧情的注意力,本身剧情也很令人注目,故事用长夜来描写心理的闪光点也不少。虽然故事不完美,但是故事从头到尾也有作者的感情和作者想表达对生命意义的思考。

长夜深梦,这部FVN确实令我眼前一亮,虽然开头没有直接代入进去,不过这个充满奇幻,又有成长的梦是真的细糠。从变成狗,失去做“人”的权力,然后逐渐在成长成“人”的故事。我能想到的是,交叉叙事不怎么乏味,从狗、人、小孩等多个角度叙事,这个故事讲得很意外,虽然美术的吸引力很一般,但是如果真的去认真看这部FVN,我觉得我好像没那么在意美术好不好的问题了。

就是有个bug,游戏关闭后,保存的存档都会消失。

呃,其实是不怎么加bgm啦

应该又是我没有注意的失误,可能比赛结束且我有时间的时候再处理。

有趣,但FVN没有凝聚好灵魂,还偏离了故事核心

感谢阿萨老师的指点,我既没有构建好骨架,又模糊了核心主题,这些硬伤确实影响我脑海里FVN想表达的,不过我会尽可能的补上这些短板。

很喜欢mml做的追夜人,不管是剧情还是程序,其效果都令大家眼前一亮,我都开始幻想如果一开始没人拿到太阳石的剧情是什么样了。

已严肃食用mml

还是用中文对胃。

Grandpa! The game you've been looking forward to has been updated!

This optimization must be the best ever, I played most Fvn without realizing it, and then, hug Zzzzzzobbe...... z.

I have a suggestion: If the screen adjustment still doesn't work, move the dialog box from the top of the screen to the bottom.

It's the same situation as me. Sometimes I'm afraid of accidentally touching other keys and restarting the game.Then the dialog box will also be blocked, and the reading experience of the top line is not very good.

Hey, Zyyph, many bugs have indeed been fixed, but the compatibility issue still hasn't been completely resolved. Maybe my device configuration just doesn't meet the requirements, mainly on the Android side.

It's also possible that the version of Windows is too low

The main issue is the browser. If you play for too long, some minor problems may also occur with the pictures. Also, when playing with Android, apart from the possible crashes during operation, the screen still has the problem of being blocked.

In fact, the pc version sometimes fails to run properly. When running on the Android side, the program may crash, and even the screen may not display normally.

Ok. It's updated. At present, the only drawback I feel when playing is that there are no large-sized prey like Dergie to eat, or as the boss, I can't be the last food.

Resurrected !!!!!!!!!!!! Hug Benjie, hug Oz, hug Az!!!!

One problem I noticed is that if the protagonist is promoted too quickly, the boss is too easy to die, and may not be able to see the new vore animation or additional story, and then there will be a feeling that the boss is too weak to stir up the desire to win, so I recommend adding a boss below a certain amount of health will cause a short period of invincibility (within a battle).

An interesting point to add is that every time my health was very low, I relied on the slow-moving Slime and fought against the boss in the dying.

Hey, Zyyph, I got to the first ending. Any other endings? Then, I play experience evaluation: first, the plot is good,and I'm once again diving into autumn's story; The second is that if you put the skill in the top left corner of the screen, maybe you can replace esc, which is also quite cumbersome to click all the time; The third is that compared with the previous game, the protagonist's ability to improve faster than before, and it is much more comfortable to play; Finally, it would be nice to have a small map in the top left or top right corner of the game.

My first words as I played the new game were "Long time no see, Autumn".

Looking forward to your next update.

What? Chapter 1 just ended? I'm starting to wonder who Chapters 2 and 3 could date, like a famous snow leopard.

It's been a while since I last played the sponsored version, and I forgot to report a bug: regarding kihijo, if it is digested by kihijo when it is struggling in the stomach, it will be digested directly the next time it returns to kihijo's stomach, but restarting the game can solve this problem.

But I'm not old.

When Azzy updates, my grandson will say, "Grandpa, FVN you like to watch has been updated." And then I died happy.

It's over. It's a miracle.

I remember the other day I got a score above 40,000.

Two endings have been completed, leave or stay

Although I have been waiting for nearly half a year, I am super satisfied with the content of this update. Your serial surprises have taken me by surprise. I will continue to play "Remember the Flowers" !!!! AWA

I look forward to their arrival, including Zyyph yourself.