Hello! Thank you very much for the kind words! I have taken your words by heart and will do my best on my next project when the time comes! I hope we will meet again in another VN stream because it was a lot of fun!
Hi! I hope you had fun with the game and thanks for spending time reading it! I understand what you mean and while my main focus was, exactly, on the present living with Sergio, I could've handled it way better with the latter part.
The way I tried to implement the theme was also a bit subtle than I'd like. I wanted to tell a story that's instead of following the light in the dark, the light of all the good things follows you, and lighting up the dark around you. That is why the main character, while looking at the tragedy every single day, could still feel the light coming from the things around him, waiting for him to get back on track, and for them to surround him once again.
It's really a shame I couldn't write the story the best way I wanted it to be. And thank you, for telling my the flaws I have left inside the game that have yet to be well executed.
Hi! Thanks a lot for reading my visual novel! This is a really good take of the story that I really appreciate! You are right about me not making Sergio as lively as I wanted him to be in the visual novel. Even though it was my intention in making their interaction all just about spending a normal day together and nothing else while still finding something to look forward to in their lives everyday, I did feel like I was missing the exact thing you pointed out, mostly because I feel like it would be too much thinking to their casual days and should've been said through the memories they had from the past. Yet, it could still be better executed, I'll try another way of telling the story in the future!
Again, I can't thank you enough for such a beautiful comment about my game!
Hi! Sorry for replying so late! This is the most constructive feedback I've had for the game! Thanks a lot for picking up my game and also for letting me know the ways I could do to improve it! I'll take your advice to heart and try my best the next time I make a game like this one!
Hello! Sorry for replying so late, I wanted to take more time looking at the game before answering the comments. I can't thank you enough for lending me the sprites and also for reading and liking my game! Though it's still flawed in so many ways, it warms my heart to see you picked it up and enjoyed playing it. This comment is beautiful and it made me really happy.
Hello, my English is not very good but I want to make it the primary language of my project, will my work would be accepted if there happens to be some grammatical mistakes here and there throughout the project?
Also, when will the Jam Password Quiz Google Forms close? Thank you!
