Its amazing how much a simple add like that poster scene could do really. I appreciate that a lot!
And yeah Khazeem was fun! I took couple tries on his standard fight because I forgot I had the cologne. His slut mode fight though took many tries xD I am still trying to make sense if its rng or there is a sequence. The ending is good yeah, well crafted ^^ it played with my emotions a lot so I loved it :D
I have managed to beat the game in both normal and slut mode. I am just writing here to applaud the writing of this game, and 4 of the scenes that stood out to me. I interacted with the game in a self-inserting way so you'll understand where I am coming from as I write them here.
1) The porno scene is amazing. The emotions and fear that goes through the bunny after watching his own clips were amazing, the fourth wall breaking comments were very creative.
2) The nasty posters outside the club after his second service in the club is amazing. I actually felt the embarassment that the bunny had and was desperate to remove them myself (on the first encounter of this scene).
3) Having to talk to everyone in the club before the third service in the club was also very embarassing. Having to invite them in his normal state of mind was difficult and degrading to the ego even to me.
4) The most impactful scene is losing to Khazeem in slut mode. (Avoiding spoilers) I was hurt to see them getting dragged into the mess unwillingly out of their kindness and concern. Plus, knowing they may get a more wholesome future role with the bunny makes it hurt even more. I couldn't watch the scene twice.
Everything else was just sweet sweet icing for me, but the way you presented the consequences of being a mindless slut hits close to home and very impactful.
All in all, you know the formula very well, so keep doing what you're doing now. I look forward to your next chapter. :)
I love how I feel about this game. The corruption doesn't just affect Mezz, it does affect the me too. I say that because I am bad at the game, and have no idea how to maintain the sanity of the bunny that I lose even if I am trying not to. Slowly I feel myself starting to give in and accept I'm shit at the game and maybe should accept Mezz is going to be a toy if I am playing the game, and its slowly breaking myself into the idea.
I mean I could stop playing if I am getting tired but who am I kidding xD
The "hero" in me still thinks if the game can be a little easier, less tedious, or the consequences of losing isn't as impactful. But you do you boo this is amazing as it is.
