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All I can say is: you bastard. This is only the second renpy VN that made me decide to be a better person and only pursue a single girl (The first one being Offcuts). I would just feel bad about breaking Naomi's heart.

So what did you do? You made me feel equally as bad for crushing Mel's self-esteem and breaking Lyanna's heart. No matter what I do, I'm a terrible person.

You bastard.

Edit: And you even have a portion where girls line up and I have to reject them one by one.

Does the grammar improve as the game goes on? I watched the prologue and hung out with Melissa and at least 25% of sentences were either awkward or grammatically incorrect. I can look past a few errors here and there, but when playing a visual novel, I need to be able to read it without cringing. Even the map is lacking " 's" after the characters' names.

The models look great and a lot of time was clearly put into this, but the dialogue is all so awkward so far.