Does the grammar improve as the game goes on? I watched the prologue and hung out with Melissa and at least 25% of sentences were either awkward or grammatically incorrect. I can look past a few errors here and there, but when playing a visual novel, I need to be able to read it without cringing. Even the map is lacking " 's" after the characters' names.
The models look great and a lot of time was clearly put into this, but the dialogue is all so awkward so far.