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You're more than fine! Thanks for working on the project :3

I just checked back in from the most recent update, and the cosmetic changes made playing this game feel all the more smooth and fun. You can inspect posters now by just clicking! I cheered at this detail, there's a lot of interesting tidbits around the base.

The fixed orientation of the sonar symbols while you rotate was a great touch; where I was a tad lost when I first tried the game, but this attempt felt natural. There's a new scare that was implemented which also got me, so props there as well.

A wonderful, promising concept! The only thing I could ask for is simply 'more'; more insight into the future story, more time with the gameplay-- which is a good sign to return to the project in the future. Photography is solid, and the game is easy to read and explore.

PS: if you also would like to stare at posters up close, you can get atop the bed to get a better look at the darker one.

As in a book/pdf, instead of one that automates your choices like a twine file! Literally just a bog standard cyoa book, in that sense.

I know people define analog CYOAs in different ways, but would you say that sort of IF is acceptable for submission, provided it follows the standards of focusing on road trip topics and being original work?