Definitely sounds like the act of running hahahah! The melody is very interesting and jumpy it kinda makes you actually want to run, especially at the faster tempo it’s at. Also pretty nice chord changes.
Gotta love breakcore!! I like this one a lot, the beginning guitar part gives off a little bit like beach rock implications, kinda making it feel like we’re actually running on a shore. The next part with the violin tho, did not really fit. But then you brought the accordion in and it became beach again!
The one thing I really didn’t like was the distorted guitar solo part has some notes that don’t really work with the chords that are happening, and that really irritated me.
But right back it again with the sick ass drums and accordion! I love that part.
beautiful soundscape! The whole first half was extremely good! Then at some point it became as if you weren’t sure where else to take the music, and it kinda came off clearly. I think what you could have done is keep that whole beginning, then at that point where it became confusing, use as a whole new section and make it obvious that you aren’t just trying to make the first one last longer. This will also allow our ears to relax and prepare for the next time the cool part comes in again!
Ok, the ambience is ok. I think you should have expanded on the beginning music and made into the piece, I don’t understand why you started it as a melodic piece then turn around abruptly to become an ambience without much, if not any, cues to the original idea. If it was going to be an ambience piece, then you should have started it with that because starting with a melodic piece completely changes the perspective of the listener/player.
I was thinking the same thing that Jofes commented. It definitely doesn’t give off mysterious/unknown territory as it seems too peaceful and calming. Actually the first thing I thought is that it sounds like that one Minecraft song, but even in Minecraft it’s one of the cheerful cute happy songs, not one of the mystery unknown ones.
But overall, it’s a pretty good loop for an underwater scene, it just lacks a little depth.
I really like that harp arpeggio! I thought it was like bubbles rising to the surface. Also the chord progression really feels like it implies water and the melody was simple enough to catch on easily. And the strings in the beginning very nice touch.
pretty cool! First thing I have to say though, it was VERY loud lol I got my ears blasted hahaha. Anyway, I like the wave effect of the sound kinda coming in and out every bar. Also, near the end there was an arpeggio that picked up, but it only lasted for like 8 bars and I really liked it! I wanted to hear it more!
I really enjoyed this one, I wish I could make mine more ambient and interesting like this one! Very creative uses of sounds, it felt like we were in a submarine searching for some underwater treasure or something.
I wish that it had a little more evolution though. The vibe was established early on, and it was very cool, but I wanted to have a liiittle bit more change throughout the piece.
this was a great piece of music! Underwater scene, captured well, but it had somewhat of a medieval field with the melody. I like all of the variations that came throughout the song, I think it was a good length.
I also agree with MikeyCee613 in that the shaker is a little too loud and slightly overpowering/distracting.
Overall, I think he did a great job. The only real thing I kept thinking about was that it felt very medieval with a touch of underwater in my opinion
The bassline is very catchy, simple, and enjoyable! I feel as though you captured the underwater vibe well, especially since you focused more on the deep end. I only wish that the panflute was a little more subtle, because it began to take away from the deepness in my opinion.
