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Man one day Fran will get love... one day. 

Like I'm pretty sure Fran hasn't been "deflowered" yet

Heads up, an exception occurs if I choose to remain calm.

Downloaded through mega link, was restarting the game and came across different languages from English a few time. Kind of random, sometimes the dialogue will change to Russian or the choices will. Found out that loading a previous will fix it.

Not a big issue but brought it up because I didn't know if it was known.

Looks like fun on a bun

4 days late but while I am not too keen on the prostitute thing, she goes into it for money and dealing with a deadbeat dad, not because she want's to just enjoy sex. I mean fucked up truth is, that is probably the fastest way for a teen girl to make enough money to survive off. I don't mean like OF girls that start right at 18 because they want quick, but she actually needed it to survive before MC and his sister come along.

I am in no way saying that I like main LI's being prostitutes in a harem game but it seems to be going the route of saving her and getting her out of that life, whether as a friend or lover. Which would probably make her 100% loyal... or you can ignore her I guess. But even if I decide not to pursue her as a LI, I will as a friend. I think if done right (we will see this update hopefully) we could get a good mature story about saving her from a shit life as a prostitute. More that than any form of NTR. 

But I like Ayase and Miharu (I think think that's her name) more so maybe I am not as upset since I am not as invested atm. 

Yeah I am probably making a mistake by posting on this thread but whatever. I don't know how nuanced they are with tags but it seems like her story is going to involve getting her out of that life, so considering her and the MC aren't in a relationship at the moment, does it count as sharing if she at least stops being a prostitute before a relationship starts between her and the MC? A genuine question.

With the vanilla tag I imagine there wouldn't be any NTR of any kind. Prostitution should be added at least.

Either way, while she does see to be an obvious main LI (hintedat at the beginning), she is optional so if she stays a prostitute in .4, easy enough to stop pursuing. For me. A former prostitute can be tolerable if done right... maybe.

Do we get any of that real degenerate stuff like handholding? 

Oh yeah, I forgot Magna rivals Mc on the number random girls she fucks lol 

I mean I just never did anything with him, or them. They are still a character but their "path" was avoidable. If I recall.

I could be in the minority but I kind of liked Tracey... Here's hoping we get more of her. She has good potential and could use a Daddy.

Nora Assistant path?

Thought it was a march release for a second lol

I mean it was a past event and you could skip it so I didn't really think too much about it myself. While it is easy for me to sit here and say to just tell the story you want, I'm not the one getting all the hate. I've seen how ppl react to anything even slightly "ntr" so I understand if you want to just take a step back.

Its the holiday season, so just enjoy and take a vacation, I will be looking forward to the next updates when you come back.

The one VN (so far) that has me slightly anxious to read the updates. I just know there is a good chance that Story Anon is gonna make me feel depressed and shit lol Not that a VN invoking emotions in me is a bad thing, I mean it as a compliment 

Sounds like the Joker before his villain arc 

Unfortunately now it is time to wait patiently for the next update.

Quite enjoyed the game

cool thanks for the reply

Sorry if this has been addressed but is there a scene with Sasha? I have her path but under her gallery is a question mark. Is that from her other path or did I miss her scene?

yeh I didn't skip cause I was in the boy scouts for a day, gotta help the damsels and all that... but I totally understand where people came from. We as the player had no idea who she was so wasn't the best way to introduce a character

That is fair. Whichever works for you, I am just gonna enjoy the ride

Out of curiosity, how many branches are you planning? Or should I just wait and see?

I am reading it either way, I guess I am curious if this only effects the main story and the MC or if it changes the "LI" paths as well or are those just pick and choose which paths you want to follow and are separate from the main story?

Eh I should just be patient and go in blind.

Sorry if this has been addressed, I should really just join discord already lol

Has it been years?

Yeah there are choices, the further you get the more there are. Incase you haven't figured it out on your own.

Isn't this the NSFW version? Thought prologue was SFW

C*ddling and h*ndholding? You son of a b*tch, i'm in!

Rude not to return the favor and show some love to a certain kitty but otherwise I quite enjoyed the prologue. Even that isn't a real complaint.

Honestly I have no criticism and I am looking forward to seeing what's to come. As a layman that just enjoys things; I enjoyed it.

I don't mean to come off as a degenerate but we need more hand holding and Ryoko kisses

Enjoyable game. I mean MC can come off as an idiot, a 14 year old pervy (I guess I can't say much since I am playing said AVN) idiot, but still good game lol 

Sandbox didn't feel all that grindy, at least to me. I was slightly worried about making money but that wasn't really an issue. Kind of wish I could make that kind of money picking flowers at the park but life is what it is. 

There are plenty of games out there that have it, why not go play them. I mean I think you can probably get some enjoyment out of this even without NTR, though I am not a fan of NTR so my opinion probably won't matter much. However, the dev stated no NTR, so don't really see the point posting about it. Dev stated there is none (probably to avoid ppl asking about it) so it is what it is.

And the dev could get $600 from one person to add it but then they might alienate some of their other supporters.

It's understandable that some dev's stick to their discord or patreon for this reason. I imagine you want the constructive criticism so you can see where you might want to improve, but seeing people get upset or hate on something just because it doesn't fit their preferences really doesn't make much sense to me. Usually if I don't like something, I will just move on. No need for me to write about how I hate that there is optional [insert fetish] or MC doesn't fit the perfect image of what I think a MC should be. Honestly that would just make it boring. It's nice seeing what people come up with rather than the same old cookie cutter characters.

Like Ari, I like her character... Though hopefully she doesn't do what her archetype tends to do lol 

So yeah, you do you. I have enjoyed what you have created so far. A few issues but they have been mentioned and most will no doubt get sorted as you learn the software and whatnot. 

Romance?! Now that's a fetish I can get behind...

Woot!

I can see how that might not be too popular among some people. I will still do multiple starts for my favorite to see the different dialogue, easy enough, but thought I'd ask in case I needed to prepare 9 saves lol I did enjoy the first 2 chapters and am looking forward to more

Suppose I should read through Academy for a refresher. 

I was curious, how much of an effect on the relationships will the choice of who you spent the night with have? Like I don't mean to ask for spoilers but will it be more flavor text or will it have like a boost to say Rheas relationship if you chose her. I guess I am wondering if it kind of locks you off from some content....

Here's hoping Juna gets that bump to main love interest if she hasn't yet

Damn, thanks. Didn't know about that youtube channel

Club wasn't the best descriptor, the lounge where Cj meets jamie and she finds out about who he is and his name, right before Keiran shows up.

Before they chase him through various "worlds" he created

Quick question, what song plays when Jamie is talking to CJ in the club during chapter 51? Chorus is no 'no regrets' I think. Was it one you made yourself? I just enjoyed it but couldn't find it on StoryAnon youtube channel or in the playlist for out of touch so was wondering if it can be found anywhere.

Woot

Enjoyed the new update, however, now I have to wait for the next one... sad.