Understood, keep up the good work!
CrayonGobbler
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I love the story but i hate the scenes/replays, the story is well written and makes you actually think, who will betray you in the future when/how/why? but the scenes are boring and feel hollow also money is prettymuch useless after a while, you dont need it for anything but the tax (i couple hundred per week) and buying contracts, gifts are prettymuch useless and "dates" are also just meh.
The story is worth sticking around tho.
dont worry the game is great as it is but there is always a way to make everything better even if its a small just a small QoL thing like the quest tracker, i love the game, its incredble and im not the only one who thinks so... just keep doing whatt you think is right, it worked so far and i trust in the process but dont overwork urself and take ur time, im very exited for future updates!
the story is way too overwhelming (in a good way) i forgot this is a AVN i even some skipped h-scenes (they feel kinda empty without sounds anyway) and bc the story was having a chokehold on me, i never got hooked so much on a story in my life every character is unique has a unique story and behavior fitting the design and it feels like the MC is just a side character instead of the main thing that everyone and everything revolves around which is actually way better than the usual way games like this go also the plot and story is on another level and im not talking about the "main story" every bit of story and dialogue just incredible for the lack of better words there are only a few things i dislike that make the game feel empty sometimes:
-the lack of things to do outside of story progression like some sort of grinding system like a job/a way to level up stats would be cool even just a way to spend time with characters and improve relationships or just plain/simple but also optional minigames (I know there is chess but thats not on android and im too stupid for chess anyway)
-indicators where characters are like a portrait next to a location/exclamation marks next to location indicating events.
-many events had to be started at the same day/time so i had to skip many times the morning/noon and night most things seem ot happen on the afternoon it was kinda annoying
-and like i said before sound effects make the game feel empty
Even after an hour of playing i knew even a 5 star review wouldnt be enough to give this game justice...
And the worst of all things there is not enough of this game...and i need more...
The game is decent but scenes are meh and weird to get you have to play the story for the characters and if you want to repeat it you have to get the stat to a certain level by buying presents and or get an item? Kinda stupid imo especially if there is only one way to earn money and its not alot and you cant do anything on the weekends outside of story progression....the dialogue and characters are very good but the gane is lacking stuff to do, its very lackluster in that department especially for a sandbox style game
Poorly balanced i can barely talk once to a single person, i eat (lose all the money i made prior), go to wrok and shower i did that for a week and when i tried to talk to a perosn i lost 2 hears bv i was too tired? Also eating 5 times every day is very annoying just to lose almost half again after sleeping....
The game is pretty good but it would be alot better as a sandbox game, you have many locations but you dont do anything there exept a short storry thing like buying something for a quest or talk to someone bc of a quest
The story is pretty boring at the start but becomes very compelling, the art is gorgeous even tho the scenes are 9/10 times completely blocked by the textbox and/or have bad angles while also being incredibly short.
The art and story are by far the best part so kudos to the artist and writer
Amd even tho i like the game the linear narrative is not my thing, its a great game nonetheless and im glad i gave it a shot
Best wishes
Great game so far, the storytelling is very well thought out and the scenes are pretty good and the only thing i dislike is the lack of stuff to do... i reached the end once and all i had to do was go to school and then sleep but thats forgivable its a WIP after all, great job so far keep up the good work
The story is fucked up in may ways but very well written and actually compelling but scenes are short and the replay function is not that good but DAMN is the story worth it also the money system is super, you are not forced to do the same shitty minigame over and over again and there are different ways of getting money

