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Hey William,

I just uploaded a playthrough on the itch page. I wont have a google form for this sprint, but posting your general thoughts on the page would be helpful.

Thank you for playing and providing a bit of feedback.

Hey DyeDuo, 

This prototype is looking pretty good and fun. It took me a little bit to get the controls down, but I managed to complete the level. I read over your design document, and I think the story you have planned out looks great. The movement feels good and flowy, but one thing I would add to the character is an arrow coming off from the center of the player pointing towards where the cursor is on the screen, while they are in the Red Eye form. Having a sort of helping tool like that can be great, especially if there isn't going to be much feedback besides the Red Eyes. It also makes it clearer where the double jump is going to push. As for the theme with AI, that topic can be very interesting once you dig much deeper with it. There are AI that produce an immense amount carbon, like ChatGPT, but there engineers and scientists aware of this issue and are trying to create AI that take significantly less energy to operate. For my two cents with the story, maybe have a character that is a 'good AI' and is stuck between the war with the humans and AI. Or any thing with a sort of plot twist is what really captivates me and makes a story more interesting. 

Keep up the work!

Hey, Two Weeks Studio! 

This game idea looks great with the main theme of Greenwashing being a major problem big companies take advantage of. The scope looks very reasonable with having 12 people, but make sure keep each other in check, so things get done and everyone is included. The aesthetic looks very cool, it reminds me of Firewatch, but I would also like to know what sort of sounds or ambient noise will be included. Maybe a suggestion can be using sounds similar to 90's technology when you dial a phone number or startup sounds of applications, just to give the player a reminder what and when the time is. I love that world building is a key idea to keep the world feeling alive. For the gameplay, I would like to know if it is PVP, or just against AI? And some what are some ideas that you will keep in mind for balancing each card? 

That's all, keep up the work!