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I really like your point crawl! The art you have in it is nice, however I wish there was maybe one more piece for the point crawl, this feels more like looking at a state machine. I really like the world you've created here.

Wow, the art in this rocks! It feels like all your art would fit perfectly together as the cover to an old game. I like how much you were able to fit without huge amounts of text cramming or tiny fonts! This is my favorite game so far, nice work.

I love the visual design of the module and it is sweet to see some Mothership!  

I'm having some trouble figuring out how the actual adventure is to be played. I should give this a re-look on a weekend when I've not been programming for 8 hours. I can tell there is something very interesting in here.

I love the rumors you came up with, I wish we had more space on ours to have as fleshed out of a rumors section. I did initially have complaints about the lack of any kind of map, but after seeing the city generator you included, I'll preemptively revoke that complaint. The module is sweet!

I'm super jealous of the typewriter script you used. I wanted something similar to that for Way to Wellerman Square, but we never found one that quite fit. The Ogre love letters are very funny and clever. They have a whimsy that is missing from Wellerman Square.   I think the idea of a portal dungeon is awesome. 

I would suggest against the grey(?) text on blue that you put in some areas. While I liked the Ogre Love Letters, they are very hard to read without zooming in closely.

I'm super jealous of the typewriter script you used. I wanted something similar to that for Way to Wellerman Square, but we never found one that quite fit. The Ogre love letters are very funny and clever. They have a whimsy that is missing from Wellerman Square.   I think the idea of a portal dungeon is awesome. 

I would suggest against the grey(?) text on blue that you put in some areas. While I liked the Ogre Love Letters, they are very hard to read without zooming in closely.

Nice job on the artwork, I absolutely love the watercolor look! The descriptions are really nice. I love the birdsong and hook as adventure randomization elements.

Thank you for the review Knurrkater! We were worried about our title at first, especially when so many other titles in the list felt more obviously 'fantasy adventure'. It took us a bit to find our inspiration, but ultimately we are very happy with the module.

I love the artwork you used for Apostles of the Burnt Augur. The layout is really fun!

Hi, thanks for the review Kernel! I stared at the adventure long enough to forget that the song was something we referenced.  We would be very surprised if this was ran as a single game, it is rather chunky. We like to think of it as the seed that would start a long term campaign.

Your artwork on Hidden Empire was a huge inspiration for Angelina, the team member that made our cover. She is delighted you commented on our work!

We didn't originally intend for the city to be such a grungy place, but the tone naturally developed over time as we wrote location descriptions. There was a point where the team realized we had made a really scummy city and absolutely fell in love with it.

I took a quick look at Caves of Hither and Yon, I'm super jealous of the typewriter script you used. I wanted something similar to that for Way to Wellerman Square, but we never found one that quite fit. The Ogre love letters are very funny and clever. They have a whimsy that is missing from Wellerman Square.

Thanks, Lowborn, we really wanted to put more info, but had so little room after cramming the map and location data in there. The team has talked about making an extended edition of this module and we would definitely like to include more varied encounters by district.

Siren's Watch looks awesome, I love the tower map you drew. The Crab King is really fun.