I'm super jealous of the typewriter script you used. I wanted something similar to that for Way to Wellerman Square, but we never found one that quite fit. The Ogre love letters are very funny and clever. They have a whimsy that is missing from Wellerman Square. I think the idea of a portal dungeon is awesome.
I would suggest against the grey(?) text on blue that you put in some areas. While I liked the Ogre Love Letters, they are very hard to read without zooming in closely.