Wonderful visual novel, just finished reading it right now! The dynamic between the two was messed up, but also sweet and cute, as is often the case with epic toxic yuri hehe. I really really really like how the dolls look. Laura especially is really cute, and Blue is, dare I say, quite the dame! The big surgery segment was really operatic and awesome (in a traditional sense), hard to look away! Great job! :D
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Hey! I'm a person who asked about your visual novel at that meetup a while ago, and I finally got around to playing it! Very very cute! I like how you portray Samus personality and appearance wise! (bird samus is always peak) Each segment contributes it's own unique vibe, very nice pacing, well done all around I'd say!
Hey! I just wanna say that, even though I've yet to complete a run of the game, that this is an amazingly written and put together game! I should write a full review when I'm done, but I wanted to just comment and say that I thoroughly enjoy the adventures of Valera!
You've got quite the way with character writing, I'd say! I found myself caring for Valera almost instantly! (Though I'm biased towards cute elves!) Many of the comedy moments made me laugh, and I was invested in knowing more about each of the character's lives and stuff as soon as I met each one!
The way you write the erotic parts as well is very good, I find the combination of the wacky kinky set-pieces/scenarios and the way you write the characters talking about boundaries and how they feel, very very cute and sweet! Makes it feel more real, fun, and relaxed! Can't wait to see if you make something else someday!
(Final Note: Might I just praise as well your use of the RPG Maker assets? Each piece is used in a very naturalistic way, that it makes the environments feel much more lived in than I expected, if you don't mind me saying! RPG Maker games are cute in general, and you really used that to your advantage! Very cute little locations! ^w^)

