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Secondary feedback:  I have gotten to the "Floor Meeting" fifth person before I had to shutdown and it has only gotten better but...  if I as a real person am holding a box and told "Take the F***ing keys!"  I am going to respond with "Yes I will just use my prehensile 12 foot penis that I am hiding in this box full of stuff you moron.  Put them in my pocket or place them in my hand because I don't want to dump my s*** all over you.".  Just sayin'

I did not but given a choice Mega has it's own pre-scan virus checks which you don't see (I paid a small fortune directly supporting Mega).  It should be safe but as with all things take anything said online with a grain of salt

First feedback less than a minute in:  Some people like to actually read the story but can't read as fast as you have set it to write.  After I give my name the "story/background" goes by way to fast to read and there is no way to stop it.  You may want to include a setting to allow "click to proceed" as most other games have done.

I love the art but still prefer to understand what's going on even if it isn't important.

Game looks hot so far.  Please keep us informed when you add further sexual content.

Love the most recent update and have a minor suggestion: 

 Add a gallery to allow players a chance to re-watch scenes AND see which scenes/areas they have missed which would be locked but say where/when they take place.

Really love the "extra scenes" with Hart, Jeff, Tiffany and Naomi that take place when you visit them after the completed content.

As a long time purchaser through itch.io I am wondering if there is any point in downloading the Storybook-Extended-0.0.3 version if I have access to the 0.4-P4 version or are they worth playing both?

It's sad that men live forever in Wonderland?

Yep been a kid going on more than 50 years :D

I have to tell you this looks like it could be quite a good game.  As a guy who downloads GBs of games every month I would love to show you some love and support if you keep making this game.  

A) hiding an adult title be shortening it always seemed silly to me but your title isn't anywhere near such a title.  B)  Shortening a title so much it becomes unrecognizable only works for people who download 1 title a month or even less.  I download and test hundreds of titles a month and your current naming structure made me immediately decide I would not download it or support it (I own thousands of games from multiple sources all of which are paid for to support the developers).

Can you explain what "bskwin-r6.zip" has to do with the title "HELP ME, BRAVE SIR KNIGHT!"?  I can't even be bothered to attempt extracting this game for fear of the viruses it might contain based on the lack of connection between any recognizable name.  Just because the program you made the game in suggested using a short name that doesn't mean call it something unrecognizable, try something silly like "help me bsk" which is still short but easy to understand.

Thank you very much.

Now that you have released the final completed game I'm totally willing to support a dev for his work I just would prefer a permanent pay once and I own it instead of pay a month of Patreon and then losing my copy (my PC often crashes and loses info on several drives) and having to pay Patreon for a further month.

Very hot game but...  

The green spots that increase on the girl are frustrating without explanation and the lack of cleaning her is just gross.  When I use a toilet I will at least wash my hands and if a sex worker showed up without keeping herself clean I sure wouldn't have sex with her.

Bug report version 2.0.3:  Round 1 total domination win $250 plus $500 for bounty, round 2 fail on bounty (I figured out why later) win nothing and no bounty.  exit to main menu and start again with money matching my ending point, round 1 crush it and win $0.  If each fight pays out $0 after round 1 I can never get all the skills and techniques.

Having purchased the game, where do we get the cheat codes from

OMG the artwork is god awful but somehow you really work it for all it's worth.  It was so worth the cost to get the full version and I haven't even gotten to the "Raiders of the Golden dildo".

Reading the overview I find this to be an excellent looking game preview.  I hope all goes well and you are able to finish the game to the end.  I hope you are releasing the patreon version after a suitable wait since I am unable to support you on patreon.

Just an FYI for the developer/programmer: https://www.google.com/search?sca_esv=e058c774e46ad98b&rlz=1C1CHBF_enCA1042CA104... that is a link to a google search for roulette, the results don't show any card games AND your game has no explanation making it a game of random "You Lose!!!" every few button clicks.

The lack of completed pictures as I go through this wrecks the whole "in the moment" feeling.  I could even handle the incomplete and badly drawn pictures of the car and Anwar if it was emphasizing her lack of awareness because she was in pain, however it just keeps going.  Also at the point of **Spoiler incoming** "We are home and you're mistake caused me a great deal of agony!" she would have insisted the game was over or the marriage would be, just saying.

If I open the spell book and toss the ingredients in the correct order it accepts a successful ingredient half the time which makes the potion fail.  The blow off your clothes then underwear followed by forced self pleasure feature is more annoying than fun.  Game needs a major rework.

Your Mediafire link gives me "Website blocked due to a risky pattern", based on my Mediafire use from other sites I would rather not get any content from this link instead of risking my PC safety.  Could you kindly make another link to any other host site, maybe Mega or Workupload so I can feel safer downloading there?

Or instead of trying to explain how I would go about that while paying attention to the fact I suffer from a brain injury the devs could release it on itch.io with a mark up so that they make the same money as they would on steam.

This game looked very promising at version 0.2...  almost a year ago and no further updates,

You need to add a volume control for the music, I have the whole game volume in windows volume mixer down to below 5% and it's still annoying and loud.

Allow me to point out a few things:

A) purchasing Chapter 1 gets you 1 update (Chapter 2 obviously).

B) Chapter 1 and Chapter 3 are the same series but really count and act as 2 separate games which happen to use the same universe and rules (with the option of not Playing the 1st 2 chapters and just answering some questions to play chapter 3).

C) $10 once every 6 months is a very cheap price (Oh no $1.66 a month) for some good new content and story.

D) Somewhere on or connected to this page is a link where you can get the free version a month or 2 later.

Just a quick spelling check for you:  A persons goals to accomplish would be "Tasks".  Tusks are large teeth that stick out of the mouth or beneath the mouth like a male boar or male elephant.

I thought this might be the case, I am a fan of the show so I understand the idea

I have an issue occurring in your game (v0.2.1) right off the hop, Lisa starts speaking and nothing I do can change the speed at which her very long sentences skip forward.  If I roll back it doesn't roll back 1 sentence it jumps to the beginning of her text so that the first 3 sentences took me 20 odd roll backs to actually read,  This might be fine but for 2 facts 1) I can't enjoy story without reading all of it even if it is meant to show her intelligence is astronomically above his  2) I suffered a brain injury 15 years ago and my reading speed is about 1/4 or less than others.  If this is a bug please fix it and if not please fix the "auto-forward time" or set it up as almost every other VN so that I can turn off auto forward, Thank you.

Why does that affect your answer?  I share my steam account with my underage grand son when he visits and I would rather not have him accessing games that he should not be playing.  I am also a realist who knows just because the question of age is asked and "Click here if you are not 18" is a choice that button is only ever hit by accident.

I don't buy nsfw games on steam.  Please tell me you will make this game available other places than Steam.

It really is the cheesiest work around for anti-incest and could get devs banned from patreon if someone tries the game and renames the landlady as Mom.  I have seen a few games where the MC is staying with Aunt (not related) or family friend which are way more realistic story wise.

What is not really being acknowledged is a Patreon account can be taken down by a single complaint because of something so simple as "You have allowed the landlady to be renamed and therefore have broken our no incest rule.".  Patreon is actively banning anyone that might think about breaking the rules and they will actively remove themselves from adult games entirely because "who needs income when you have principles?"

I like the look of your game and I hope it goes well for you.