First feedback less than a minute in: Some people like to actually read the story but can't read as fast as you have set it to write. After I give my name the "story/background" goes by way to fast to read and there is no way to stop it. You may want to include a setting to allow "click to proceed" as most other games have done.
I love the art but still prefer to understand what's going on even if it isn't important.
Secondary feedback: I have gotten to the "Floor Meeting" fifth person before I had to shutdown and it has only gotten better but... if I as a real person am holding a box and told "Take the F***ing keys!" I am going to respond with "Yes I will just use my prehensile 12 foot penis that I am hiding in this box full of stuff you moron. Put them in my pocket or place them in my hand because I don't want to dump my s*** all over you.". Just sayin'
