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Interesting concept, but I feel like the execution is missing some things. The story somewhat drags, when you can figure out the twist quite quickly, let alone the hints of hope and the MC not caring after awhile to placate lily.

Options to intice the MC to betray the bad guy would be a fairly interesting twist, such as lily doing things that make the MC reconsider their choices or decide to act differently when the end happens. I notice the distinct false illusion of choice, but it would be curious to see how certain curcumstances and events influence the actions of the MC, or lily, in the ending. Such as not trusting in the MC as much, leading her to find escape on her own, or a change of heart in the MC. 

Just food for thought on all that. Edit: I feel like a longer journey, or time to think, would naturally raise suspension and doubt in a character like lily, whom seems to come from a troubled home to begin with. Again... Food for thought. 

the fact that people can't easily figure out the riddle/Easter egg/story, is honestly the mark of a well written story in my eyes: it's not obvious if you just blast through the game. Just food for thought on future projects; maybe folks will figure this stuff out sooner or later than expected, but always keep it clever. 

I continue to watch these indie horror games because of the potential narratives and themes that can come from it, as well as the mechanics and clever use of assets that some folks manage to get right. I feel this is a potential diamond in the rough developer, so imma keep an eye out for future projects from them. 

P.s. yes I know I haven't bought a physical copy of the game(s), I don't really play many games myself tbh, but just my two cents that his stuff is worth looking into. 

P.p.s. the name/phrase Nemesis game is not the easiest google/YouTube search... You would be surprised just how many things have named their property nemesis lol...