Thanks for your reply! :D I reread what I originally posted and I realize it may have sounded too negative. I did not mean it in that bad a light. I was tired and I just honed in on the points I was in contention with. Even with those points you are definitely onto something with this .
I'll definitely check out your next few updates to see if this goes in a direction I can follow :D
I love the renders. I hate your storytelling. Not nearly enough info on what's going on. Why is there a 2 year break? What are the actual relationships, and why did they change? Confusing.
Too few choices early on. Forced sex scenes (where there is no player option to do it or not) are bad form (especially since there is no necessary story element there).
It's basically a kinetic novel with free roam to make it technically not a kinetic novel. KNs should be presented in 3rd person, not first, as it makes little sense to be first person with no options.
The free roam elements are clunky and just waste time. They also break the flow of what little story is there.
Renders are animations are spot on (with the exception of the animations being a bit too fast.
It was very frustrating to play through, due to too many confusing plot points and the clunky free roam which really has no reason to be there.
I get you are solo on this, and are doing what you can, but there are glaring holes in your presentation thus far. I hope you get it situated, cuz I will definitely add financial support it if you do.
Emily route is ok...but the responses could be better. It sure seems as though this is a voluntary cuck route. Not digging that. IF that is what it is meant to be, perhaps a warning should be put on.
I mean there is a response to break up, but then it is removed. Then MC goes all cuck instead of putting her in place. Not my bag. Most of the responses to Emily's 'behavior' are unrealistic. I dig the cheating...that is the point. But forcing MC to accept it is just plain weaksauce. I mean sure, it should be a choice, but so should dumping the bitch once she is caught or majorly suspected.
Katie route is crap tho. Obviously just my opinion...but again...no choices but to keep symping.
