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Chaldeus9931 days ago(-1)

I love the renders. I hate your storytelling. Not nearly enough info on what's going on. Why is there a 2 year break?  What are the actual relationships, and why did they change? Confusing. 

Too few choices early on. Forced sex scenes (where there is no player option to do it or not) are bad form (especially since there is no necessary story element there). 

It's basically a kinetic novel with free roam to make it technically not a kinetic novel. KNs should be presented in 3rd person, not first, as it makes little sense to be first person with no options. 

The free roam elements are clunky and just waste time. They also break the flow of what little story is there. 

Renders are animations are spot on (with the exception of the animations being a bit too fast. 

It was very frustrating to play through, due to too many confusing plot points and the clunky free roam which really has no reason to be there. 

I get you are solo on this, and are doing what you can, but there are glaring holes in your presentation thus far. I hope you get it situated, cuz I will definitely add financial support it if you do.

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BPT29 days ago (3 edits)

Hey! Thanks for commenting.

In response to your questions:

I included the two-year time skip because I wanted the player to have a general idea of who the characters was before the time skip.
I think that’s important for better understanding their backstories.

Choices made up to this point in the game aren’t noticeable yet, since the point where the two paths diverge comes a little later on and will depend on several previous choices.

The issue with free roams will be resolved in version 0.1.1—a “skip” button will be added.

As for the plotlines, I’ve already planned them out, and I hope those “confusions” will be cleared up as updates are released. (However, I’ll take this into account for future updates.)

With the release of 0.1.1, I’ll explain several topics—including the reasoning behind the free roams—in greater detail. 0.1.1 will be released this weekend  (9/6/26).

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Chaldeus9929 days ago(-1)

Thanks for your reply! :D I reread what I originally posted and I realize it may have sounded too negative. I did not mean it in that bad a light. I was tired and I just honed in on the points I was in contention with. Even with those points you are definitely onto something with this . 

I'll definitely check out your next few updates to see if this goes in a direction I can follow :D  

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