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I played the old version, and I said I was a bit underwhelmed because I found the writing awkward and it was hard to get into it because of that. But I gave this new demo a shot, and first off very surprised by how nice and polished everything looks including this demo page, and second... Definitely an improvement for me! Writing/dialogue still is a BIT off for me but much better overall, and I really dug the humorous vibe.

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Laughed a lot with the "Brewtal" updates, just because it's like, wow dude makes NO effort to be subtle and MC being like "omg who would even follow this terrible person" and I'm thinking "youre getting the pings for his updates and he's filling up your feed, so aren't YOU following this dude??". It felt very unserious to me in the best way, I named my MC "Macaroni", and I will happily follow the development of this fun triple-yandere game.

Pierrot is also used as a title for the "sad clown" archetype, if I'm not mistaken, so a sad clown is "a" or "the" Pierrot. Comes from way back in Italian theatre

Hm, I saw a lot of positive comments (and I liked the vibe of a somewhat humorous triple-yandere story) so I had my expectations high, but the writing and dialogue felt awkward throughout. Maybe it just wasn't my style, but I had a hard time getting through it.

The background art and illustrations were nice, though. Good luck with the full release!

Ok, I had a lot of fun playing through this tbh, genuinely got a few good laughs out of me while finding it all charming still. I'm just gradually getting back into VNs and now I fear this one has raised my expectations unfairly for the ones I will be playing after, haha. I love a short and sweet game. But for once, hearing that more is coming doesn't make me apprehensive, and I'll definitely look forward to any updates.