I played the old version, and I said I was a bit underwhelmed because I found the writing awkward and it was hard to get into it because of that. But I gave this new demo a shot, and first off very surprised by how nice and polished everything looks including this demo page, and second... Definitely an improvement for me! Writing/dialogue still is a BIT off for me but much better overall, and I really dug the humorous vibe.
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Laughed a lot with the "Brewtal" updates, just because it's like, wow dude makes NO effort to be subtle and MC being like "omg who would even follow this terrible person" and I'm thinking "youre getting the pings for his updates and he's filling up your feed, so aren't YOU following this dude??". It felt very unserious to me in the best way, I named my MC "Macaroni", and I will happily follow the development of this fun triple-yandere game.