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IMO this game isn't amazing, a lot of typos, noticeable clipping on characters with larger tits, some of the sex anims seem a little lazy, but for the most part it falls under what i consider to be "good enough". I did 100% it (as of v0.5.4), and i will be waiting for updates, but in its current state its def not perfect. 

but my main issue with the game, the whole reason i felt like writing this comment, the opening sequence is horrible. i was going to play this several months ago, despised the opening, and uninstalled. this time i decided just to skip through it and im glad i did. 

vns with a 'narrator' character lose points in my eyes (in this case it made up for it), then being introduced to maddy with her weird text quirk (which made it hard to read imo) was enough to turn me away from what I otherwise consider to be a mostly good vn. 

so i am here, begging the dev, to please please PLEASE rewrite the opening. maybe use kitty instead so you can still explain the alice stuff later on? 

i think overall i wanna give it a 7/10 tho. worth playing for people who like porn vns, just maybe skip the opening. 

in my first playthrough once at the point where you say "it should progress to the next stage", nothing happens. The dialogue on the bottom bar is gone, the hypnosis app says "Target Missing", and clicking on anything that seems like an option will not progress the game. 

I restarted and spammed through the dialogue and now when at the same point a "Remote View" window pops up and i can progress.

as for what would be different between the playthroughs: in the first i was playing in full screen, got a javascript error halfway through, and i rejected the demon as much as possible. Second playthrough i didn't full screen, never got that error, and accepted immediately. Not sure if any of this helps debug but thats all the info i have.

Good luck!

Just a few general suggestions/reports based on my several hours on 0.86.3, some may have already been mentioned, but I feel like I really enjoy the game and if I can, I would like to help its development. I do however understand that any developer is not inclined to even read this, and has full choice to completely ignore it, but idm talking into a void as long as there's a tiny chance the void talks back.

• With "New" hypercamo eyes (and maybe all eyes, I didn't test), they sometimes bug out during insertion in the bj position, making her seem like she has a lazy eye, doesn't seem intentional

• Maybe some dialogue for Annalie when you leave after placing a custom order, atm she gets sad you didn't buy anything and I feel bad about it. All I'm thinking is something along the lines of 'your order(s) will be here soon', just to make it feel like she knows I did actually buy something 

• I noticed very few, but some dialogue where after you name your bot, the game still calls her "bot" or "my bot" as if that's her name, I don't remember exactly where, but I remember feeling it was weird (I know, not really a helpful report)

• Personally I feel like the game relies too much on the stock market for gaining money, like, don't get me wrong you do get quite a bit just from streaming/donations, but until you get a couple thousand followers it feels like the stock market is required for earning money to not be a slog, and early game feels like you're just grinding up to Vinegara premium. I suggest looking into somehow reworking the early game progression economy-wise

• I've seen this suggestion elsewhere in this thread, and it feels like the bane of interactive porn games, more positions. I'm sure this is somewhat in progress, or at least planned. Overall I like the quality of the current positions, and I'm not suggesting you sacrifice quality for quantity, but yk, thought I'd say it

• Add the "Request" feature to more positions/new positions it feels to me like a position without the request feature just isn't viable(?) like, I know missionary and doggy have the speed settings, but after some small amounts of testing it feels like just letting her do her thing with the "Take the lead" option leads to more views. Could be speculation tho, idk how the game works behind the scenes. Imo the request option could be locked behind progression, or some event and it'd be fine, and I get not letting the female lead in some positions like missionary bc like, that just makes sense

• New bra types it seems like there's only 2 types, "Plain" and "Lingerie" while there's like 4+ dif types of panties. Basically I just want a striped bra to match my striped panties and stockings. (I understand if this isn't a priority, as it is purely cosmetic) (also more shoes, just having the one type is kinda sad imo)

• I'm sure this too is something in development, but more story, I don't really have like a grandiose long term plot in mind, but just having more characters, more conversations, and a little more worldbuilding (maybe on a smaller, less political scale) would be nice, and I get this isn't like a full release, and its a small team but like, I like what exists currently and want more, so keep it up :)

• Related to the previous, but different, more direction, most of the time I feel like I have no idea what I'm supposed to be doing to progress, so I just go on my money grinding loop until something happens, expecting a phone call or something similar. I'm not sure how exactly this could be well implemented, maybe just some sort of notebook or a log you can check, with lines like "Today I visited the church, the priest bot told me to return in 12 hours", or "Today I met a homeless man, I hope I don't run into him again" (in a way that suggests you can/will run into him again)

• Better contract tracking, I got to a point where I hated doing contracts because all of them have the "between x and x time" requirement, and having to check the pc over and over to make sure I'm wearing the right shirt, and that its the right time, and that I have the right amount of followers and whatever other things, I just got sick of it and just stopped doing them altogether. My best idea at the time of writing this is to just put a whiteboard under the equipment cabinet with the same green/yellow text to tell you if you meet certain conditions, for a less in-universe option just add it to the hud somewhere. I just hated having to menu-nav to check each condition one by one, and I kept forgetting certain small things and having to recheck

• This is gonna be a pretty weird and poorly informed suggestion, thus why I'm tacking it to the bottom, but at some point I got a qte option like "Where do you want to cum" while in cowgirl, honestly I was tabbed out and didn't even really read it in time to select anything, so maybe extend that timer..? or make it more common, because that was the only time I've seen it in the at least 2 hours I've been sexing the bot. 

But yeah, Honestly I've loved this game, it really feels like an actual game compared to most porn games that really put the porn before the game (in that sense it reminds me of Crimson Keep, even if that is a bit more fantasy and fetishy). I like a lot of the attention to detail, like the bell choker making bell sounds, the part value mechanics, the stream chat being kinda funny, a lot of the easter eggs are really cool too (like the entire church/Holy C backstory, I laughed so hard I had to explain the whole joke to a friend, then I kept going through the dialogue and it mentioned Derry Tavis and I nearly cried lmao). I guess as like a final suggestion, I'd like a compiled list of the stream chat dialogues/donation messages, it can just be a stickied community post or something but I found a lot of them funny and wanna see if I missed any.