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I played the game and I think the game need 2 things:

1st: Voice messages, in some moments Liz can send some voice messages and with the passing of the time and the passing of the text messages the messages will sound strange.

2nd: Voice calls, instead of the previous thing or besides of the previous thing Liz can make some call phones to the MC (Player) and we can hear her in the phone (Like the previous thing the audio will change call after call) and the MC (Player) can answer with text to continue the conversations.

A part or the mentioned things the game is AWESOME, I just hope, by the part when Liz ask to the MC not use condom, this game ends in pregnancy. Please I can't wait for the new update more long and full of content <3

First than nothing, I try the demo and the art is very good, I notice the bugs, I hope you can solve them asap.
Second, please add pregnancy content, a good NTR isn't a GOOD NTR if do not ends in pregnancy.
Third, I know surelly is because it's a demo but I want to say it anyways, I hope the final version be more long I mean, in the demo the FMC is corrupted very fast and I hope the corruption take more time in the final version.
Fourth, the game is maked in a chat style of gameplay so, if you can (If is very dificult just forget it) maybe can be interesting add audio messages or add a call system (The FMC talk with her voice and the player answer with text) or even a little amount of short animations adding a "Videocall" system (Same idea than before but with videos instead audios).
Fifth, you can add a better choice system that can make 2 or 3 path changing the other man in the relationship (You can add more type of Male characters like a White man, another girl with toys or futa).
Last, please don't make the MC (Player) a Cuckold (At least not in every path) I mean, if is NTR (NeToRare) the MC must doesn't know what are his wife with the other man until be too late (I mean for example if you add pregnancy, the MC (Player) don't must start to suspect or know the truth until she be pregnant) And before I forgot, to mantain the mistery and the POV of the MC with all about the affair of his wife in secret I suggest make two perspectives or 2 chat systems (You can make 2 separated games with this and make more money in plain: "First you offer the MC POV with a huge amount of mistery and you don't know nothing of the FMC until the end in some path, after you offer the FMC POV in a second game (Like a secuel for example) showing what passed with MIA when she was having her affair with Danny or the man/mans/womans that you make when the game or games be finished".
I hope this coment help you to improve your game and you can make a very impressive NTR game <3

Greetings and success.

1) I will wait for more updates before play it again to play it with more content and give you a better and more complete rate.

2) If you need a good VA I recomend Misuzugon, she have a very sexy voice and have packs with moans, maybe this help you to advance more and better with the "Audio Messages".

3) Maybe I need play more and try play better with the options but like I said before is better wait for more updates.

4) I was thinking in what you said before of 2 more girls and since you will do one NTR profile more and the other will be NTS, maybe the second NTR girl can start being NTS and become after in NTR to be a middle point between the first profile and the third profile (And you can make a choice to let the player decide if want continue with the NTS form or become it in a NTR story)
For example: The girl ask to the MC (Player) if want continue or not with the NTS experience if he want continue with the NTS the story will continue being NTS but if he ask her to stop the story will become in NTR (The girl want continue with the new experience even if her boyfriend/Husband don't want it)

I hope this inspire you and help you to improve the game (And to please the more type of public possible)

Well firts that nothing I know this is a demo but... If you will make a demo, include at least 1 NTR scene, I can only play the 1st chapter and nothing happens, I can't say if there are something to improve or rate if I can't find nothing of content.

Second, maybe to make the game more interesting you can try to add some "audio messages" (I was thinking in "call phones" but if there are not response from the users isn't a "Phone call" unless that the user can answer a "phone call" with written messages...) that maybe can make the game less boring with only text and some images.

And third, talking about images... The game need more of it, lots and lots of images, only in the fist chapter there are only one image (And wasnt NTR, only the girl naked, very boring, sorry but I feel it like that).

Is only a Netorase game or will have Netorare content in some point of the game?