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Well firts that nothing I know this is a demo but... If you will make a demo, include at least 1 NTR scene, I can only play the 1st chapter and nothing happens, I can't say if there are something to improve or rate if I can't find nothing of content.

Second, maybe to make the game more interesting you can try to add some "audio messages" (I was thinking in "call phones" but if there are not response from the users isn't a "Phone call" unless that the user can answer a "phone call" with written messages...) that maybe can make the game less boring with only text and some images.

And third, talking about images... The game need more of it, lots and lots of images, only in the fist chapter there are only one image (And wasnt NTR, only the girl naked, very boring, sorry but I feel it like that).

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Sure, with the next updates I will expand more the 3 current routes that are in the game now, and the NTR  theme will be more present.

The audio messages are planned but I need to request a commission to a voice actress (I'm still thinking about adding something like just moans though)

For your third point, can you only see one image? currently there're 12 images divided between 3 routes options, to see them you can go to the settings app and reset the chat to be able to repeat (I'm working on a flowchart system too to make that more easy).

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1) I will wait for more updates before play it again to play it with more content and give you a better and more complete rate.

2) If you need a good VA I recomend Misuzugon, she have a very sexy voice and have packs with moans, maybe this help you to advance more and better with the "Audio Messages".

3) Maybe I need play more and try play better with the options but like I said before is better wait for more updates.

4) I was thinking in what you said before of 2 more girls and since you will do one NTR profile more and the other will be NTS, maybe the second NTR girl can start being NTS and become after in NTR to be a middle point between the first profile and the third profile (And you can make a choice to let the player decide if want continue with the NTS form or become it in a NTR story)
For example: The girl ask to the MC (Player) if want continue or not with the NTS experience if he want continue with the NTS the story will continue being NTS but if he ask her to stop the story will become in NTR (The girl want continue with the new experience even if her boyfriend/Husband don't want it)

I hope this inspire you and help you to improve the game (And to please the more type of public possible)

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Thanks a lot for your feedback, maybe the next update you wanna play is the v0.4.0 (Feb-14), where the story will end, now a lot of the time I have for this  goes to the programing side but with that update I expect to have the majority of the components and game programing done. Then the main focus will be on the content.