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Thank you! It's not that the stop is too abrupt, but that there isn't enough impact and development after it.

Hi!

This work can be divided into 3 independent parts:

-Ambient

-Botanic hip hop

-String orchestra + choir

Each of the parts is connected to each other and reflects its own mood for this theme and picture:

-Ambient reflects the very essence of the crystal cave - endless corridors dotted with sparkling crystals. In places, a mysterious atmosphere of tranquility.

-Botanic hip hop reflects all the charm of the crystals themselves - their sizes, colors, shades and brilliance, and rainbow iridescence in the lonely rays of the sun. All this makes the sound be unpredictable, chaotic and active.

-String orchestra + choir represent the emotions and hopes of a person entering a crystal cave. They begin to believe in miracles, and their imagination is filled with new and exciting images. They are transported back in time and contemplating the future. However, he realizes that his long journey is not over yet, and he will face new challenges and obstacles.

I completely agree with you, at times the sound becomes really heavy and unpleasant, but unfortunately I didn't have enough time to fix it. 

 I spent most of my weekend creating this work, but with such a short period and hours of continuous work, my attention became blurred, which affected the structure and quality of the track!

 Thank you for the positive feedback!

I really liked the work.
Can you tell me what was used to create this detune shimmer reverb on the guitar? What instrument libraries were used? I would greatly appreciate it!

See the description of the musical work on the my project page

It's definitely a good technique, and it sounds good in your work. The only thing that knocked me down was the moment at 0:07 seconds when the snare drum became noticeably louder.

I listened to the beyerdynamic dt 770 pro, but after listening to the Adam T7 monitors, I want to note the wide stereo picture. However, I really can't get rid of the feeling of hum in the mix. Maybe I'm just a fan of the drier sound and just don't understand the genre.

Thank you! The mentioned album is very good

Well-executed atmosphere (Reminds me of Zelda's world). I can't find any flaws, and for me, this sound evokes images and helps me immerse myself in a different world. It's convincing!

However, I would prefer to hear it with less high-frequency content in the reverb (I feel like there's a lack of lower midrange, which could be caused by a slight emphasis on high frequencies).
However, this is insignificant, just a small subjective nitpick

Бро, отличная атмосфера, даже сказать нечего. Ты знаешь свое дело!

The jingles from the beginning would have been suitable for Drake or Tyga in the beats)

In general, a good job, competent selection of instruments, harmony. Most of all, I liked the arpeggio (Harps??).

 The only thing I want to complain about is the percussion at the end. In my opinion, these beats failed to fulfill their function (They are too vague, and in such a climactic moment, as it was intended, it creates an unconvincing sound) I would still suggest that they be revealed, made more confident, so that they really put an end to it. However, this is subjective.

 In any case, I like this work

The idea at the very beginning can quite be implemented in a good hip-hop beat
-In the work most of all the moment with uncontrollable low (In the low-frequency spectrum plays 2 different instruments, and even different notes - this causes discomfort)
-Most of all in this work I liked the bass (It is very elastic and with character), however in pure form it can be listened to only a couple of seconds. I would like to hear with this bass and harmony a real hip-hop beat.

In any case a good start

Good job, convincing

This could be very good, but I'm confused by a couple of things.
-The mud in the lower part of the spectrum makes it difficult to distinguish between instruments
-The introduction of the snare drum with syncopation at 0:07 sec. (this is very confusing)
-The harmony (this is subjective) But it's still a good job!

Very good understanding of melody and harmony. Cool bro

It's a good job, both in terms of melody and in terms of selecting the right instruments and defining their functions.

Cool bass, bro

Thank you! I still have a vocal sample that my university professor gave me