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The fanfic being the best part is some bittersweet irony, haha. Thanks so much for the thoughtful comment, I really just appreciate hearing your and everyone else’s opinions! One day I wish to create something more serious.

Wdym weird signal to give? I was just being open and saying whatever felt natural. The 1-day dev time is the context to why the story is underbaked. ^^’

Thank you for the review!! Those are some valid questions and areas that could use improvement. Yeah, the focus was supposed to be on Mine’s persuasion. You’ve given me stuff to reflect upon, even if this won’t get an update. :3

Thanks so much, I appreciate it :D And also thanks for providing the art, it’s really nice!

It deserves all the awards and more.

(Jk, thanks and I love you <3)

Thank youuuu! ^^ If you’re asking about symbolism, I guess my answer is this:

sorry for not being up to date then. though i was at least a little correct, until they are all replaced.

but hey, this is good news

lust shards uses copyrighted art without permission. this google doc lists all the assets and where they're originally from: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wDxTl8MCeItL23V_wqUQ0c1rQBgK4LSmlkdysOgfOS0/...

aaaa this was so sweet and wholesome! it was an overall pleasant read, even if it's mostly small talk and nothing actually happens. still, lots of good fun bits. the whole group is just very cute. i also love seeing vns focus on friendship.

aw thank you so much!! i really apreciate it :3 aside from writing, the technical aspects are also something i find fun to do.

Very atmospheric and immersive. The general mood and vibe reflect the sad reality the wolves were forced into. Art and music are also on point. The story has me really intrigued and I just can't wait to see the rest of it!

A lot of effort went into this and it was definetly worth it. I love the art so much and it's oozing personality. The story was certainly fun, as well as interesting. There's a lot I like about it, but also a couple aspects I'm not a fan of, such as Walt's stark shift in behavior over minor choices. But yeah, overall this is a great VN! >w<

This is quite nice! The pacing is great and I like the humour. Lack of music is unfortunate.

This was nice, overall. Nothing I can readily point out as a flaw, really. Curious to see where the story goes!

thanks a ton for the comment! i actually think that mentioning "rom-com" at the end might be a mistake, because what they're doing is not what people usually consider a rom-com. also as you said, there may be a few details that dont make total sense at the moment. either way, thank you!

What a fun read. The writing just in general is very enjoyable and amusing, especially during the office meeting. I like the way everyone is characterized, including the MC. I feel like the ending could have explored the serious themes a little deeper. It was a big shift in tone, but definetly an interesting one. All in all, this was a great VN >w<

thanks, i really appreciate this!

so you're saying it's disjointed. i tried my best to have a logical narrative here, but maybe I didn't do the best job at making it clear, haha ^^