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AHHHHH I'M SO LATE, AGAIN!
but my usual monthly comment after an update has arrived!

First of all, I love all the changes you did even if minimal, it's really is a pain in the ass if you've already got so many sprites to edit and I assure you we'll be happy even if for you it doesn't look quite right since after all you as their creator will see details that most of us won't notice.
Second, I'm astonished with all the backgrounds that you made and 13 music tracks! You really made a lot of work for this update.

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Now for the story: You almost made me had a heart attack, heck that disappearing act that Reuben did and the upcoming alphas that might put a stop to all Neo did, almost made me think we'd lose him.
I was surprised that Neo took out an omega like Darhunt in such a short time and (love the sun dagger design) thanks for another 101 of the Kalight body functions 'cause if I didn't know that I'd though Darhunt was a goner.
Is Neo secretly a past Alpha or Omega or something much more endearing?
More to the 101 biology of the Kalightians about their organs, much appreciated but I do have a question, Is their blood some kind of acid? that also tasted good or bad depending on the person and maybe what they eat.

MmmGHhhMm Reuben's scene...
I'm with Neo with this one, it's a bit soon but it's not like we ate, took or drank what was in front of us, they were just helping a buddy blacking a whole colony through a helping hand.
I'm so glad Neo was able to reason with Reuben 'cause if he didn't come with the Jaw Divers I'd manually put an option to stay with Reub and make the game end as one of the endings, glad that wasn't the case.

Ahh the finally a background that isn't a shade of gray, Purple Flesh Colony here we are!
Shame we didn't spend as much time in it like we did in the Black Colony, I really liked the design of the city and it's not as blinding as the White Colony, fortunately B man's bar is just the perfect place to shield my eyes from being blind. Now I wanna know how popular B man's bar is since his blood is so tasteful and the ambience is so moody in such a good way that it'd be like a chill café. Love our interaction with "Fanboy" Darhunt (Only for S'Ferro) and the little bed time story Seth told us.

Here you unlocked a part of DancingSeth.png

I'm not sure what to expect in the next updates since now they have a lot of open options. I won't bother you with the misspellings since there's almost none... depending if you're using American English over Britannic English.

Love from Bon <3 <3 <3
(I'll try to finish the "dancingseth.png" for next update and maybe add something more mmm, Until Next Time!)

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Oh shucks (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
It's the least I could offer since reading your stuff actually helps me too, especially since it's something that a person who was close to death multiple times and the stuff you write it's not all "Doom and Gloom" so it really helps.
Shame my primal instincts are basically the same as B-man Philocision, meaning almost inexistent BUT not all is lost, I just gotta have confidence in myself (I've got to be more fierce if I wanna have a chance with the definition of "Potential boyfriend" of Reuben).

I'm also trying to get better at drawing, I hope that it won't disturb you if I use some of your sprites to get some of the fanarts done.
I'll get better at it and soon maybe I'll do something decent.

For now though, ENJOY THE CHRISTMAS! If I get any coal from santa I'll stash them until we see Siro so that I can throw them at him.
I'll be waiting, patiently and exitedly, for the next update.

TAKE CARE! AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°  *Virtual hugs*

AAAHHH I'M SO LATE! 

sorry for being so tardy. 
Anyway, You've done it again, I'm absolutely blown away by everything you've wrote and THE MUSIC, oh the music is always top notch, I'll be waiting for day 4 AFTER the Christmas vacation's are over, so Kideshi I ask of you not to be so hard on yourself and get a nice winter vacation.

[SPOILERS AHEAD]
So first of all, I love the cooking tutorial with seth giving us a Kalightian Culinary class instead of the usual Biology one, which I still adore.
I hope we'll have more time to cook and eat whatever Seth and Neo made, especially if Seth will bend over every time to pick up a utensil~
hopefully though, next time we won't have to bleed by thinking of negative memory to get the sizzling started.

Oh my, the Endomycha scene, at least we got some new info about Seth's past and ahem kink cough* and by the way, I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but is the "sexy color gray" supposed to be a reference to 50 shades of gray? Either way *Vomits*

Hope you like the magazine I found laying on the ground of the treasure room. (That Demented shark on the ceiling gave me a such a scare that I stumbled down and found myself face to face on this very explicit magazine.)

Returning to the Endomycha scene, man oh man, The Jaw Divers are gonna have additional trauma on top of what they had plus I didn't expect that being horny woudld save us, but I ain't complaining especially with the view that I got~ *Whistle* I gotta give it to ya, those were some nice assets and rods that you've shown us, alas, if I could only touch them instead of just our own... nontheless, thanks for the show.

Now, talking about the music...
"Touch Me Lullaby" is such a song that I could describe such as a simple "laying in bed and listening to the rain outside hitting the glass accompanied by a broken Vinyl playing in the background" but I must interpret what I saw or felt during that lullaby.
It starts with a nice melody accompanied by a sound in the background that could be paragonized as the sound of the rain, soon after if I listen intently, I think I hear someone humming, now I'm envisioning 2 people that may be the same but not quite. The sound of the rain now is accompanied by a rumbling of a machine, the 2 of them are inside the car and as the young one sits in the back humming that song, the car moves faster and faster until it goes off from a bridge or a cliff and suddenly the melody becomes dull, like someone was drowning it, submerged into the water and it's not constant, It's like having brief flashes of memories of what happened before it all crashed down, repeating that nice lullaby on loop.
Sorry if I'm killing the mood like Reub'o but I just hope you've healed from whatever happened in year 12.

From what you've written anger seemed to be the solution against being depressed, and it might be a good one at the start but anger usually subsides after a short period of time, therefore Lust was the next solution which was more constant as we have more stuff to be horny instead of being angry at one thing for so long, yet I can't help that by the last part you've written, Companionship was the best thing someone like Neo could've ever got, especially since it's people who understand him, It's nice, I've quite teared up at that point. As always great job, You've created yourself a beautiful cult.
I'll be waiting patiently for day 4 and some explanations about the farm in which Seth was in, hopefully withouth encountering Siro, if we'll encounter him I'll personally give him a sucker punch for whatever he did to Seth.

P.S I'm gonna ruin the mood again, sorry. Again I noticed a misspelling before the treasure room and after the Endomycha scene. You wrote at the end "Roof aboce" I think you may have intended to write "Roof above".
It's really a minor error, not even worth noticing, so don't be hard on yourself

YESSS!! Nakey time while being completly horrified!

also lovevly music, Thanks for the option!

Aww shucks, you flatter me.

I just love the world you made, it has so much potential and I'm ready to experience the roller coaster of emotions that you've prepared for us.

Plus It's a good "goodnight story" for me, it's great when I read it while it's dark and rainy outside, it feels like I'm on the black colony observing from afar what mischief Neo and his group will get into.

Thank you for letting us read this story and it's more than enough as a reward for me. I'll be waiting patiently for the next update and I hope you like the Autumn air!

Happy November! ❤️

Happy Halloween Kideshi!

I'll give you a treat, presenting you with Neo as in his natural blood color, Scarlet!

"Touching pillars" ohoho~ someone is certainly a tease.

I know you can't spoil us too much of the story and I don't mind waiting, so please always remember to take a break once in a while, we appreciate your work but we don't want you to burn out.

Here are some screenshots about the misspellings, I only encountered 2 so it's not that big of a deal "how are we gonna to make it toe end" and "But if you die, you're won't get to avenge them" (This one is before Reuben was about to step in the crystal cave)

P.S I'll be there for the Kalightian Classes, they're super intruiguing

hahrheshf MY WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED! Thank you so much!!! Not only Neo was able to hold hands with Reuben but THE HUG! (plus you know~)

Man I can't wait for day 3, I mean who wouldn't want to see B man drunk, not only him but the whole squad and being so close now~ mmhm I hope Neo can hold hands again with Reuben this time for a lot more hours than mere second. I think Neo might wanna feel more of those muscles ;)

Talking about day 2 I did see a couple misspellings, but nothing bad! I was able to enjoy the story and burn my eyes with the multiple flashing colors and we're only halfway through (not even drunk yet!). I hope whatever will be waiting for them at the core will not result in one of them dying, B man seems to be the most stable one, I might just get another ride from him but from what I read he doesn't like physical contact, must be a PTSD thing (Question: Was there ever a war in the Ice Vein Colony?).

I Sensed some Jealousy  from both B man and Reuben when Seth said that He and Neo could make babies, there might still be a chance for B man and Seth to get together or is B man really interested in Neo too?

That poor Bunny, can't he ever get some respite? And what the heck was Reuben's Childhood with all those creepy but also interesting stories about this rabbit. Man, I know Neo isn't really dad material but Reuben needs some more Paternal Caring or just a closure, hopefully we don't encounter their ghost on the core or Reuben might really just chose and join them.

P.S As Always the music is great, I especially loved the one titled "kalightianclass" it's so cheery and upbeat that it almost reminds me of Kindergarten music and the Pixel Vibes!! I love it so much. (also saw a file titled "reubenromance" you can't fool me, you've already teased us with the Steven Universe licking shenanigan and that Pillar near Neo's face, I really wish Reuben might give Neo a chance in the love department)

Here, as a gift, I tried to respond as quickly as I could so please don't mind Stick Seth, he's a Skinny legend for me.

I loved every part of it, (especially the train conductor part, wonder what cake he got in the end) can't wait for future updates. Let me give Reuben a hug, that boy needs affection! Also, CONFETTI! Yay! thank you for sharing this story with us and with such lovevly music to enjoy it too!

Heh, i'm a Doll. I take it as a compliment, so thanks.

I liked the music and the imagery we got on the right (especially the owls) and I got complimented at the end so, here take my 5 stars. I'll look forward to the final product.