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Art, as well as the lore here has incredible vibes, but I think you should probably focus on your first two new factions? I would also appreciate more information on the other factions in their descriptions, but given this is new, its understandable a lot of this is unfinished at the moment. Another critique I have currently is that lot of the compendium entries are formatted more like the text, rather than expanding on the ideas found in the mech sheet compendium entries, which for some of these feels like wasted potential, especially with wellspring, which feel incredibly fascinating to me. I feel like if you fleshed each of them out with full license levels, I would absolutely want to use them in a game. Overall though, I have to say, this is incredibly appealing to me so far, and I'd love to see more, wellspring has me fascinated and I would love more from it.

I love this homebrew so much, the flavor is incredible on all of them, and despite the lack of designs, I can easily picture what a lot of them are like. I would love to see more from this faction and stuff related to the setting in general!

Agreed I think a discord would be a good idea, I think it would be a good way to talk to other players, other dms, and potentially even the devs if they were interested. 

Hoping to see this update soon, I really was hoping for character sheets for the game we plan to play with the system. One minor thing I would like to see is an alternate ruling for semblances, I feel like with the current setup it would be extremely hard to write a character like weiss who constantly uses their semblance in combat, unless every usage were to only use up one aura point.