Art, as well as the lore here has incredible vibes, but I think you should probably focus on your first two new factions? I would also appreciate more information on the other factions in their descriptions, but given this is new, its understandable a lot of this is unfinished at the moment. Another critique I have currently is that lot of the compendium entries are formatted more like the text, rather than expanding on the ideas found in the mech sheet compendium entries, which for some of these feels like wasted potential, especially with wellspring, which feel incredibly fascinating to me. I feel like if you fleshed each of them out with full license levels, I would absolutely want to use them in a game. Overall though, I have to say, this is incredibly appealing to me so far, and I'd love to see more, wellspring has me fascinated and I would love more from it.