also im really happy you seem to have expanded player agency more? hahah its just, a lot of your FLs seemed to have kinda like a default "snarky/sassy" setup to them it didn't really matter the choices you made lfmaoooo im very glad my sweet Evie aint showing sign of that, thank you!
BiaSoul
Recent community posts
I hate itchi.o algorithm, i LITERALLy had to find this piece of art in another IF's comment section ;---;
that said, i really, really enjoyed the story. i was skeptical at first that with so many options to customize personality and appearance it would hardly have any impact or mentions in the story, but im sooo gladI was wrong <3 dont know how you did it, but thank you SO much for the effort! I did have some trouble understanding some parts cause the text is a bit confusingly structured?? but reallymy joy at player flavor and engaging story overshadowed my annoyance ahahaha
I like the way the relationship with Dante is progressing tho! And the r18 was just *chefs kiss* thank for the meal hahaha. Still, could you make more of his POVs please??I love when we can see our MC thorugh the ROs eyes.
But, like, can you author or anyone clarify somthing for me cause i dont know if I undertood what happened correctly?? its a SPOILER so beware:
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
did Dante really kill Charlie??? or am I tripping??? I spent the entire story holding my breath waiting for the bomb to drop but it never did lmaooo
I'm so excited for the rewrite! I honestly LOVE all of League's works, but for some reason Supertition was always really hard for me to get into :')
please don't take this the wrong way. but I usually struggle to connect to blank characters, or like, one that feels like a blank canvas i guess? At least thats what Roe feels like to me in S1...Like, in Wayhaven for example, I had that same trouble initialy but what kept me hooked there was mainly the romance dynamics and the LIs themselves. Since Sydero is the main character we interact with (and not only i'm not into girls but i also found her insuferable tbh lmaoooo sorry sydero) and the Chris dude is okay but not really the romance dynamic I was looking for, sooo yeah, i wanna give this a chance cause Leagues's storytelling skills and the way they write angst just puts me on grOUNDD, but goddamit its so hard 😭😭😭
LMAOOO NOT VALDRICHT IN THE DOG HOUSE I'M CRYING 🤣🤣🤣i said this once and i'll say it again:
*climbs a mountain* A MAN WHO YEARNS IS A MAN WHO EAAAAAARNS!!!!
Gosh I am LIVING for the yearning on heretic route lmaoooo oh but these men are gonna have to work for it so hard they'll regret ever being mean to MC (yes i am petty)
aND OH MY GOD THE BABIESSSSS IM GONNA CRY I'll smooch them to death istg
(If predator why cuddle codded???--->Mortish will we have more chances to interact with Kerach?🥺ik he's dangerous and not supposed to be cute at all but i wanna scrath his big ol' fluffy belly so baaaaaad (and die in the process lmao) I just imagine MC going to Kerach for cuddles when her men made her mad, and damn if its not funny as hell imagining them being soooooooo pissed off at the wolf and not being able to do a thing about it 🤣🤣🤣)
I was avoiding the heretic route like a plague since i mistakenly assumed the MC would be sassy/bratish/rebellius or smth along those lines (which is totatly okay! its probably just not for me i think), but BOY OH BOY how wrong I was! I'm 100% heretic route! lol im so glad i did a replay since zealot route was a bit hard for me to ge into (probably because I have a hard time roleplaying 'faith' lmao)
ANYWAY, thank you sooooo much for this story! I've seen from your posts on patreon how much you care for your readers and how much you love this story <3
>SPOILER AHEAD!!
.
.
I'm not sure if this will happen latter at the zealot route when MC actually sleeps with the man but hooooooolly hell that was INTENSE! I'm in unbound more, leaning more towards Valdrich but was a bit unsure BUT LIKE???? I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER AT ALL??? AND IT WAS SO GOOD???!!!! I thought " oh well, they gon do it and then it'll get boring" but HELL NAH.IT GOT SO MUCH BETTER! That scene?? With Valdrich trying to strangle/kill MC??THE ANGST?? Ufffff got me RIGHT in my feelings. My MC was so scared, confused, and feeling betrayed that I was just bawling my eyes out at that point. In fiction I always gravite towards characters like Valdrich because they may be so damn toxic in real life terms, BUT they make for SUCH great delicious ANGST material, its not even funny. ❤️😩
And you're NAILING it with the writing!! (I'm glad we got the option to not forgive him right away, and I'm looking foward to see the man on his KNEES when he realizes MC lost her trust in him)
Anywayyy, thank you for this again! This is such a gem. I REALLY dont think there's yet any IF with this type of proposal <3
oh my lord this was sooooooooooo perfect. So wholesome, so beautiful, heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. The scene with the fairies standing vigil to you?With that music and writing? MY HEART WAS IN SHATTERS. Beautiful ,showstoping, a masterpiece. My only complaint is that it ended. How I wish for an epilogue, to see how MC adapts to a new world, and her new relationship. Gahhhh I wonder if there's a fanfic for this somewhere
You're amazing, thank you SO much for having shared this with us <3
aaaaaaaaaaa this was so awesome!! No story ever let me become a merperson before, and the dark twist to it is just *chef's kiss* I love the music, the BG is so immersive too! I'm so excited to read what you come up with! I wonder if will grow legs at some point? I recently watched a dark fantasy horror movie called Mermaid Down ( 2019) and lemme tell ya it was brutal
I like the thought of a beautiful yet murdering machine of a creature lol also its nice that you let us choose to have a conscience or smth like that. It be kinda "uh" to play as a mindless wild animal lmaooo well, in certain situations, at least. I had fun when we were given the option of what to do with Charlotte (?) and I immediatly went chopchop in several different ways before having to backtrack after feeling bad for her KSKSKSKSKS Anyway, I loved it! i do hope you plan to continue this! Thank you for sharing it with us :>







