I was avoiding the heretic route like a plague since i mistakenly assumed the MC would be sassy/bratish/rebellius or smth along those lines (which is totatly okay! its probably just not for me i think), but BOY OH BOY how wrong I was! I'm 100% heretic route! lol im so glad i did a replay since zealot route was a bit hard for me to ge into (probably because I have a hard time roleplaying 'faith' lmao)
ANYWAY, thank you sooooo much for this story! I've seen from your posts on patreon how much you care for your readers and how much you love this story <3
>SPOILER AHEAD!!
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I'm not sure if this will happen latter at the zealot route when MC actually sleeps with the man but hooooooolly hell that was INTENSE! I'm in unbound more, leaning more towards Valdrich but was a bit unsure BUT LIKE???? I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER AT ALL??? AND IT WAS SO GOOD???!!!! I thought " oh well, they gon do it and then it'll get boring" but HELL NAH.IT GOT SO MUCH BETTER! That scene?? With Valdrich trying to strangle/kill MC??THE ANGST?? Ufffff got me RIGHT in my feelings. My MC was so scared, confused, and feeling betrayed that I was just bawling my eyes out at that point. In fiction I always gravite towards characters like Valdrich because they may be so damn toxic in real life terms, BUT they make for SUCH great delicious ANGST material, its not even funny. ❤️😩
And you're NAILING it with the writing!! (I'm glad we got the option to not forgive him right away, and I'm looking foward to see the man on his KNEES when he realizes MC lost her trust in him)
Anywayyy, thank you for this again! This is such a gem. I REALLY dont think there's yet any IF with this type of proposal <3